故事— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using correct grammar and more natural expressions. Instead of 'stories are very interested', say 'stories were very interesting'. Also, try to avoid redundancy and be more concise. For example, you can say, 'Yes, I loved stories in my childhood because they were interesting and helped me expand my knowledge.'

範例: Yes, I loved stories in my childhood because they were interesting and helped me expand my knowledge.

建議: Your answer needs better grammar and clarity. Avoid repeating words like 'books, the books'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, 'I prefer reading stories because it helps me understand better and improves my reading skills as well as grammar.'

範例: I prefer reading stories because it helps me understand better and improves my reading skills as well as grammar.

建議: Your answer is quite long and repetitive. Try to be concise and use correct grammar. For example, say, 'No, I did not write stories as a child because I lacked the knowledge and writing skills.'

範例: No, I did not write stories as a child because I lacked the knowledge and writing skills.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using better grammar and vocabulary. Instead of 'give more preference to read', say 'prefer reading'. Also, explain why motivational stories are important to you. For example, 'I prefer reading motivational stories because they inspire me to improve myself and achieve my goals.'

範例: I prefer reading motivational stories because they inspire me to improve myself and achieve my goals.

× Certainly, I love stories in my childhood because stories are very interested and help me to develop my knowledge base.

✓ Certainly, I loved stories in my childhood because stories are very interesting and help me to develop my knowledge base.

The adjective 'interested' is incorrectly used to describe 'stories'; the correct adjective is 'interesting' to express that stories cause interest. Also, 'love' should be in past tense 'loved' to match 'in my childhood'.

× Well, I give more preference to reading stories, books, the books because when I am reading I can easily understand them and it helped me to develop my reading skills and grammatically mistake.

✓ Well, I give more preference to reading stories and books because when I am reading, I can easily understand them and it helps me to develop my reading skills and correct grammatical mistakes.

The phrase 'the books' is unnecessary and incorrect here; 'books' alone suffices. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Grammatically mistake' is incorrect; it should be 'grammatical mistakes' as plural noun. Added 'and' to connect 'stories and books' properly.

× No, I did not have a right story when I was child because being a child it was very difficult for to for me to write stories because I did not have much knowledge and writing skills to write any story.

✓ No, I did not write any story when I was a child because being a child, it was very difficult for me to write stories as I did not have much knowledge and writing skills.

The phrase 'did not have a right story' is incorrect; it should be 'did not write any story' to express the action. 'When I was child' lacks the article 'a'. The phrase 'for to for me' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'for me'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Well, I give more preference to read motivational stories because it motivates me to do much better in my future.

✓ Well, I prefer reading motivational stories because they motivate me to do much better in my future.

The phrase 'give more preference to read' is incorrect; the correct form is 'prefer reading'. Also, 'it motivates' should be 'they motivate' to agree with the plural 'stories'.