故事— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb tenses and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. For example, instead of "She always used to taught us new stories with the more motives," you could say "She often told us stories with meaningful morals that impacted our lives."

範例: Yes, I loved stories as a child. My grandmother often told me bedtime stories that had meaningful morals, which really influenced me.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid asking the examiner to clarify the question; instead, answer directly. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and concise. For example, you could say, "I prefer listening to stories because it is more convenient and saves time, especially since many people are busy nowadays."

範例: I prefer listening to stories because it is more convenient and saves time, especially since many people are busy nowadays.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has some inaccuracies and awkward phrasing. Use past tense correctly and avoid repetition. Also, clarify your points with linking words. For example, "Yes, when I was in sixth grade, my teacher assigned us to write stories about our parents. I usually talked with my parents about their college life and wrote stories based on that."

範例: Yes, when I was in sixth grade, my teacher assigned us to write stories about our parents. I usually talked with my parents about their college life and wrote stories based on that.

建議: Your answer conveys your idea but is somewhat repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I like stories that have meaningful morals applicable to our daily lives. I often share these stories with others because I find them useful."

範例: I like stories that have meaningful morals applicable to our daily lives. I often share these stories with others because I find them useful.

× She always used to taught us new stories with the more motives which have the real impact on our life.

✓ She always used to teach us new stories with more motives which have a real impact on our lives.

The phrase 'used to taught' is incorrect because 'used to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the past tense. Therefore, 'taught' should be 'teach'. Also, 'the more motives' is incorrect; 'more motives' is appropriate without 'the'. Additionally, 'our life' should be pluralized to 'our lives' to correctly refer to multiple individuals' lives.

× What mean these options?

✓ What do these options mean?

The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'do' needed to form a question in the present tense. Also, the word order is incorrect; the correct question form is 'What do these options mean?'

× I definitely go with listening these stories because they are more convenient and time saving.

✓ I definitely prefer listening to these stories because they are more convenient and time-saving.

The verb 'listening' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Also, 'go with' is less appropriate here; 'prefer' fits better. 'Time saving' should be hyphenated as 'time-saving' when used as an adjective.

× If we start reading this story, we have to spend a lot of time on reading.

✓ If we start reading this story, we have to spend a lot of time reading.

The phrase 'spend a lot of time on reading' is incorrect; 'spend time' is directly followed by the verb in -ing form without 'on'. So, 'spend a lot of time reading' is correct.

× So they and sometime in the present scenario, people do not have that much time.

✓ So sometimes, in the present scenario, people do not have that much time.

The word 'sometime' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'they and sometime' is unclear and likely a typo; 'So sometimes' is the intended phrase.

× So I definitely love the listening stories.

✓ So I definitely love listening to stories.

The phrase 'love the listening stories' is incorrect. 'Love listening to stories' is the correct form, as 'listening' requires the preposition 'to' and the definite article 'the' is unnecessary here.

× Yes, I read the story when I was in the 6th standard.

✓ Yes, I wrote a story when I was in the 6th standard.

The question asks if the student ever wrote a story, but the answer says 'I read the story', which is inconsistent. The correct verb should be 'wrote' to match the question and past tense context.

× My teacher used to give us the homework where we have to write the stories of our parents.

✓ My teacher used to give us homework where we had to write stories about our parents.

'The homework' is incorrect; 'homework' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. Also, 'write the stories of our parents' should be 'write stories about our parents' for natural phrasing. The tense should be past ('had to') to match 'used to'.

× So I usually talk with my parents about their college life.

✓ So I usually talk to my parents about their college life.

The verb 'talk' is commonly followed by the preposition 'to' rather than 'with' when indicating the person spoken to.

× So I used to write stories on the college life of my parents.

✓ So I used to write stories about the college life of my parents.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'about' is the correct preposition to indicate the topic of the stories. The past tense 'used to write' is correct.

× I like to listen to these stories which have special meaning and the morals which we can apply in our present life.

✓ I like to listen to stories that have special meanings and morals which we can apply in our present lives.

'These stories' is less natural than 'stories' in this context. 'Which' is better replaced by 'that' for defining clauses. 'Special meaning' should be plural 'special meanings' to match 'morals'. 'Our present life' should be plural 'our present lives' to refer to multiple individuals.

× I usually like to listen to their stories and always refer to others which I think useful for.

✓ I usually like to listen to their stories and always refer others to those which I think are useful.

The phrase 'refer to others which I think useful for' is ungrammatical. 'Refer others to' is the correct structure, and 'which I think are useful' completes the relative clause properly.