故事— Part 1 評分報告

建議: In English (Cambodia), try to make your sentences clearer and more grammatically correct. Use plural forms correctly (e.g., 'stories' instead of 'story'), and avoid vague phrases like 'very legendary touch me.' Also, organize your ideas logically with linking words such as 'for example' and 'because.'

範例: Yes, I definitely loved stories during my childhood because they taught me many things, such as imagination and important life lessons in a fun way. For example, a famous story about kindness and perseverance inspired me to be happy and stay excited all the time.

建議: In English (Cambodia), focus on subject-verb agreement and correct word forms, such as 'stories' instead of 'story' and 'listening to them.' Also, complete your sentences fully and use linking words like 'because' and 'additionally' properly to connect ideas.

範例: Well, I prefer reading stories rather than listening to them because it allows me to learn new vocabulary and phrases, which help me improve my writing skills. Additionally, I think reading books is good for me because it helps me feel relaxed.

建議: In English (Cambodia), pay attention to article usage ('a story'), verb tenses, and word choice. Avoid unclear phrases like 'challenged me to hesitate' and 'express my shot.' Use linking words such as 'because' and 'also' to connect ideas clearly.

範例: I did write stories when I was a child. I used to create short stories about animal adventures, and I enjoyed doing that because it challenged me to be creative and use my imagination. Also, writing stories helped me improve my creativity and express my thoughts.

建議: In English (Cambodia), try to use correct sentence structures and clearer expressions. For example, say 'I enjoy reading adventure stories the most' and explain why with specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' properly to connect your ideas.

範例: I would say adventure stories are the ones I enjoy reading the most because they often reflect exciting experiences and discoveries. Also, reading these stories makes me feel more engaged and entertained by the interesting phrases and texts.

× Yes, I definitely love story during my childhood because they have taught me so many things such as the imagination and help me learn lesson in a fun way.

✓ Yes, I definitely loved stories during my childhood because they taught me so many things such as imagination and helped me learn lessons in a fun way.

The word 'story' should be plural 'stories' because it refers to multiple stories. Also, 'have taught' should be 'taught' to match past tense context. 'Help' should be 'helped' to agree with past tense. 'Lesson' should be plural 'lessons' because it refers to multiple lessons.

× For example, very legendary touch me about the kindness and preservation and this led me to be happy and stay excited all the time.

✓ For example, a very legendary story taught me about kindness and perseverance, and this led me to be happy and stay excited all the time.

The phrase 'very legendary touch me' is incorrect. It should be 'a very legendary story taught me' to make sense. 'Preservation' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'perseverance'. Also, articles like 'a' are needed before singular countable nouns.

× Well, I prefer reading story rather than listening them because it's allowed me to learn your vocabulary and verses which help me improve my writing skill.

✓ Well, I prefer reading stories rather than listening to them because it allows me to learn vocabulary and phrases which help me improve my writing skills.

'Story' should be plural 'stories' because it refers to multiple stories. 'Listening them' should be 'listening to them' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. 'It's allowed' should be 'it allows' to match present tense. 'Your vocabulary and verses' is incorrect; it should be 'vocabulary and phrases'. 'Writing skill' should be plural 'writing skills'.

× Additionally, I think reading book is a good thing for me because it's helped me to feel relaxed and.

✓ Additionally, I think reading books is a good thing for me because it helps me to feel relaxed.

'Reading book' should be 'reading books' to indicate plural. 'It's helped' should be 'it helps' to match present tense. The sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× I did write story when I was a child, I used to create a short story that I related to the animal adventure and also I enjoy doing that because it challenged me to hesitate and using my imagination.

✓ I did write stories when I was a child. I used to create short stories related to animal adventures and also enjoyed doing that because it challenged me to think and use my imagination.

'Write story' should be 'write stories' for plural. The sentence was run-on and needed to be split. 'I related to the animal adventure' is incorrect; it should be 'related to animal adventures'. 'I enjoy' should be 'I enjoyed' to match past tense. 'Challenged me to hesitate' is incorrect; it should be 'challenged me to think'. 'Using' should be 'use' to maintain parallel structure.

× Also writing story help me improve my creativity and express my shot.

✓ Also, writing stories helped me improve my creativity and express my thoughts.

'Writing story' should be 'writing stories' for plural. 'Help' should be 'helped' to match past tense. 'Express my shot' is incorrect; it should be 'express my thoughts'.

× I would say adventure is a story I enjoy reading the most because the story always reflecting your experience since they have discovered.

✓ I would say adventure stories are the ones I enjoy reading the most because the stories always reflect experiences I have discovered.

'Adventure is a story' should be 'adventure stories' to indicate plural. 'The story always reflecting' should be 'the stories always reflect' to match subject-verb agreement and tense. 'Your experience' is incorrect; it should be 'experiences I have discovered' to make sense.

× Also reading their story can make me feel more enjoyable with the phrase and text.

✓ Also, reading their stories can make me feel more enjoyment with the phrases and text.

'Reading their story' should be 'reading their stories' for plural. 'Feel more enjoyable' is incorrect; it should be 'feel more enjoyment'. 'Phrase' should be plural 'phrases'.