故事— Part 1 評分報告

建議: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้องทางไวยากรณ์มากขึ้น รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่เข้าใจและเนื้อหาที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้อง ควรตอบตรงคำถามและเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่เกี่ยวข้องอย่างชัดเจน เช่น เล่าเรื่องที่ชอบในวัยเด็กและเหตุผลที่ชอบ

範例: Yes, I loved stories when I was a child because they taught me valuable lessons. Listening to stories made me feel happy and helped me relax after studying. Sometimes, I also enjoyed watching cartoons related to those stories.

建議: คำตอบควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจนมากขึ้น รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'living' ควรเป็น 'reading' และเพิ่มเหตุผลที่ชัดเจนว่าทำไมชอบฟังมากกว่าการอ่าน

範例: I prefer listening to stories because I find reading boring and it makes me sleepy. Listening is more enjoyable and helps me understand the story better.

建議: คำตอบควรขยายความให้ชัดเจนและสมบูรณ์มากขึ้น เช่น อธิบายว่าเขียนเรื่องเกี่ยวกับอะไรและทำไมถึงเลือกเรื่องนั้น รวมถึงใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องและเชื่อมโยงกัน

範例: Yes, I did write stories when I was a child. I remember writing a story about my family and the decisions we made that day. It was fun to express my thoughts through writing.

建議: คำตอบควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจน รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'gossip stories' และอธิบายเพิ่มเติมว่าทำไมถึงชอบเรื่องเหล่านั้นและบรรยายสถานการณ์อย่างละเอียด

範例: I enjoy listening to gossip stories because I study in an all-girls school. My friends and I come from different classes, so we often share interesting stories during our free time.

× Yes I do love story doing my share heard.

✓ Yes, I do love stories from my childhood.

The word 'story' should be plural 'stories' to match the context of multiple stories from childhood. Also, the phrase 'doing my share heard' is unclear and likely a mishearing or miswriting; it is corrected to 'from my childhood' to fit the question context.

× They taught me a lot an.

✓ They taught me a lot.

The word 'an' is unnecessary and incorrect here, making the sentence incomplete. Removing 'an' corrects the sentence structure.

× They make me go back and miss my she hurt 'cause I don't have to straight.

✓ They make me go back and miss my childhood because I don't have it anymore.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words like 'she hurt' and 'straight'. It is corrected to a clear sentence expressing nostalgia for childhood.

× Honor studying.

✓ I can relax and study.

The phrase 'Honor studying' is unclear and incorrect. It is corrected to a meaningful phrase related to studying and relaxing.

× I can chill Anneli lax.

✓ I can chill and relax.

'Anneli lax' is a mishearing or misspelling. Corrected to 'and relax' to make sense.

× I can watch a cartoon if I want.

✓ I can watch cartoons if I want.

'Cartoon' should be plural 'cartoons' to indicate any cartoon in general.

× I think listening is more fun for me. Because I don't really like living.

✓ I think listening is more fun for me because I don't really like reading.

The word 'living' is incorrect here; it should be 'reading' to match the context of stories.

× I'm not that kinda person.

✓ I'm not that kind of person.

'Kinda' is informal and should be 'kind of' in formal speech.

× When I lead a book I fear sleepy an boring.

✓ When I read a book, I feel sleepy and bored.

'Lead' should be 'read'; 'fear' should be 'feel'; 'an boring' should be 'and bored' to correct verb and adjective usage.

× On the other hand, listening is more fun. Anne. Good for me I think.

✓ On the other hand, listening is more fun and good for me, I think.

'Anne.' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'and' to connect the sentence properly.

× I remembered that I wrote about my family.

✓ I remember that I wrote about my family.

The verb 'remembered' should be present tense 'remember' to match the context of recalling a past event.

× Myself an thing decided that day.

✓ Myself and things I decided that day.

The phrase is unclear; corrected to 'Myself and things I decided that day' to make sense, though still awkward; better would be 'I wrote about my family and things I decided that day.'

× I enjoy listening to gossip Stolley because I studying in the girls school.

✓ I enjoy listening to gossip stories because I study in a girls' school.

'Stolley' should be 'stories'; 'studying' should be 'study' to match present tense; 'girls school' should be 'girls' school' with possessive apostrophe.

× I have a group of friends we from different cars so we always share our story when we have a free times.

✓ I have a group of friends from different classes, so we always share our stories when we have free time.

'We from different cars' should be 'from different classes'; 'story' should be plural 'stories'; 'a free times' should be 'free time' to correct quantifier and plural issues.