植物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence. For example, mention the types of plants and how they enhance your garden.

範例: Yes, I keep many plants at home because we have a big garden. For instance, we have planted flowers and shrubs that make the garden look more pleasant and colourful.

建議: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about the plant and its benefits.

範例: When I was young, I grew a mango tree in our garden. Over time, it became very big and now it produces delicious fruits that we enjoy eating in the summer.

建議: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Organize your answer with clear steps using linking words like 'firstly' and 'then'. Be specific about the process and materials used.

範例: Yes, I know how to grow plants because I do gardening. Firstly, you dig a big hole and place the plant you bought from the market. Then, you cover it with proper soil, level it, and add fertilizer to help the plant grow.

建議: Try to answer directly and avoid uncertainty. Use linking words to contrast ideas and provide specific examples. Also, correct vocabulary errors (e.g., 'airport' should be 'air purifier').

範例: I am not sure if Chinese people often give plants as gifts. However, they usually prefer giving technology-related items, such as watches or air purifiers, as presents.

× Yes, I keep plants at home because in my house there there are big garden and we planted a lot of plants in the garden the and even even we plant a a flower which make our garden more pleasant.

✓ Yes, I keep plants at home because in my house there is a big garden and we have planted a lot of plants in the garden, and even we plant a flower which makes our garden more pleasant.

The phrase 'there there are big garden' is incorrect because 'garden' is singular and requires 'there is' instead of 'there are'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'flower'. The sentence also had repeated words and needed clearer structure.

× When I was a young, I grew up mango, mango plant and now the plant become very big and it gives us a fruit which we eat in summer.

✓ When I was young, I grew a mango plant and now the plant has become very big and it gives us fruit which we eat in summer.

The phrase 'I was a young' is incorrect; 'young' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. 'Grew up mango' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'grew a mango plant'. 'Become' should be 'has become' to indicate the present perfect tense showing change over time. 'A fruit' is better as 'fruit' in general sense here.

× Yes, I know a lot of things about a growing a plant because I do gardening in my garden.

✓ Yes, I know a lot of things about growing a plant because I do gardening in my garden.

The phrase 'about a growing a plant' is incorrect because 'growing' is a gerund and does not need an article 'a' before it. The correct phrase is 'about growing a plant'.

× Firstly, you have to just dig a whole big hole and put a plant which you buy from the market and just put a soil, proper soil and make it level to the ground and put some umm, some uh, material soil material, fertilize material in the in the.

✓ Firstly, you have to dig a big hole and put the plant which you bought from the market, then add proper soil and level it to the ground, and put some soil material and fertilizer in it.

The original sentence is repetitive and unclear. 'Put a soil' is incorrect; 'add soil' is better. 'Material soil material, fertilize material' is unclear and redundant. The sentence needed restructuring for clarity and correct verb forms.

× I don't have a an idea whether they give someone a plants as a gift, but they they love to give someone technology wise things like a watch or maybe a airport.

✓ I don't have an idea whether they give someone plants as gifts, but they love to give technology-related things like a watch or maybe an airport pass.

The phrase 'a an idea' is redundant; only 'an idea' is correct. 'A plants' is incorrect because 'plants' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'Technology wise things' is awkward; 'technology-related things' is better. 'A airport' should be 'an airport' due to vowel sound. Also, 'airport' alone is unclear; 'airport pass' or 'airport-related item' is clearer.