植物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中表达了观点，但句子结构较为简单且有语法错误，如"I don't have many time"应为"I don't have much time"。建议注意语法准确性，简洁表达观点，避免重复。

範例: I don't keep plants at home because my schedule is very busy, and I don't have enough time to care for them. If they die, I would feel sad, so I prefer not to have them.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如"which is easy to survive"应为"that are easy to survive"，"I don't have much time to care of take care of them"重复且不准确。建议简化句子，注意时态和搭配。

範例: When I was young, I liked to grow plants that were easy to survive because I didn't have much time to take care of them. I only needed to water them occasionally, which saved me time.

建議: 回答中多处语法错误，如"growing plans"应为"growing plants"，"the reference look for the reference book"表达混乱。建议加强词汇准确性和句子连贯性。

範例: I know a little about growing plants because I haven't had much time to learn. However, if I had a beautiful plant, I would search the Internet or read books to find more information.

建議: 回答中词汇使用不准确，如"plans"应为"plants"，"more cheap"应为"cheaper"，"relax the deep of the people"表达不清。建议使用准确词汇，表达更清晰。

範例: I think it's common for Chinese people to give plants as gifts because they are cheaper and easier to care for than luxury items. Beautiful flowers can create a comfortable atmosphere and help people relax.

× I don't have many time to take care of them.

✓ I don't have much time to take care of them.

这里的time是不可数名词，不能用many修饰，应使用much。

× If they died I will feel upset which can influence my feelings.

✓ If they die, I will feel upset which can influence my feelings.

条件句中表示将来可能发生的情况，主句用一般将来时，条件从句用一般现在时。

× I preferred to grow the plants which is easy to survive because when I was a little I don't have much time to care of take care of them.

✓ I preferred to grow plants which are easy to survive because when I was little I didn't have much time to take care of them.

plants是复数，谓语动词应使用are；'when I was little'是固定表达；'don't'应改为过去时'didn't'；'care of take care of'重复，应删去一个。

× when I was a little I don't have much time to care of take care of them.

✓ when I was little I didn't have much time to take care of them.

描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去时态。

× I don't have much time to care of take care of them.

✓ I don't have much time to take care of them.

动词短语是'take care of'，不能省略'of'，但'care of'单独使用不正确。

× if the plants are easy to survive, I just need to water them which can save my lot of time.

✓ if the plants are easy to survive, I just need to water them which can save me a lot of time.

'save my lot of time'表达不正确，应为'save me a lot of time'。

× I know a little bit about growing plans because I don't have much time to gather the information about this.

✓ I know a little bit about growing plants because I don't have much time to gather information about this.

plans应为plants，意思是植物；information是不可数名词，前面不加the。

× But if I do have a beautiful plans, maybe I will search the Internet or the reference look for the reference book to get the information.

✓ But if I do have a beautiful plant, maybe I will search the Internet or look for a reference book to get information.

plans应为单数plant；'the reference look for the reference book'结构混乱，应改为'look for a reference book'；information不可数，前面不加the。

× Well, I think it's common things for people to send plans to give to each other because unlike the luxury objects, plants are more cheap and easy to take care of, especially beautiful flowers.

✓ Well, I think it's common for people to send plants to each other because unlike luxury objects, plants are cheaper and easy to take care of, especially beautiful flowers.

common things应为common；plans应为plants；more cheap应为cheaper；句子结构调整使表达更自然。

× It cannot only create a comfortable atmosphere but also relax the deep of the people.

✓ It can not only create a comfortable atmosphere but also relax people deeply.

'relax the deep of the people'表达不正确，应改为'relax people deeply'，使用副词修饰动词。