植物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Améliorez la fluidité et la clarté de votre réponse en évitant les phrases incomplètes et en corrigeant les erreurs grammaticales. Par exemple, utilisez des phrases complètes et connectez vos idées avec des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus naturelle et cohérente.

範例: I don't keep plants at my dorm room in France because I prefer to keep things simple. However, back in my home country, I really enjoyed growing plants with my father as it was a great way to bond with my family.

建議: Travaillez sur la structure de vos phrases et la précision du vocabulaire. Évitez les erreurs comme "are used" au lieu de "I used" et utilisez des phrases complètes avec des détails spécifiques pour rendre votre réponse plus claire et naturelle.

範例: I used to grow many plants with my father because it was his hobby. My most memorable plant was a lemon tree, from which we collected a lot of lemons every season.

建議: Améliorez la grammaire et la cohérence de votre réponse. Utilisez des phrases complètes et évitez les erreurs comme "growing plants is not my hobbies". Clarifiez vos idées et utilisez des mots de liaison pour une meilleure fluidité.

範例: Actually, growing plants is not my hobby, so I don't have much knowledge about it. However, I know that plants need to be watered regularly and sometimes you can even talk to them to help them grow.

建議: Améliorez la précision et la fluidité de votre réponse en évitant les phrases fragmentées et en corrigeant les erreurs de vocabulaire. Utilisez des phrases complètes et des mots de liaison pour exprimer votre opinion clairement.

範例: I'm not Chinese, so I don't know much about this. However, I guess that in China, people might send plants as gifts to wish good health and prosperity to the recipients.

× Actually I don't, I'm studying abroad in France an I keep my room in the dorm.

✓ Actually I don't, I'm studying abroad in France and I keep my room in the dorm.

The word 'an' is a typo and should be corrected to 'and' to properly connect the two clauses.

× As much as simple as possible, but.

✓ As simple as possible.

The phrase 'As much as simple as possible' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'As simple as possible' to indicate the degree of simplicity.

× At my home country, I really enjoy keeping plans at home with my father because it's a good way to bond with my family.

✓ At my home country, I really enjoy keeping plants at home with my father because it's a good way to bond with my family.

The word 'plans' is incorrect here; the correct plural form is 'plants' referring to living organisms.

× Are used to grow a lot of plans with my father because.

✓ I used to grow a lot of plants with my father because.

The phrase 'Are used to' is incorrect; it should be 'I used to' to indicate a past habit. Also, 'plans' should be 'plants'.

× It was his hobbies, but my most memorable trees is a lemon tree.

✓ It was his hobby, but my most memorable tree is a lemon tree.

The word 'hobbies' should be singular 'hobby' because it refers to one activity. Also, 'trees' should be singular 'tree' to match 'most memorable' and the verb 'is'.

× We've collected a lot of lemons from that tree an that so.

✓ We've collected a lot of lemons from that tree and that so.

The word 'an' is a typo and should be 'and' to connect the clauses properly.

× Actually growing plants. Is not my hobbies so I don't have many knowledge about it.

✓ Actually, growing plants is not my hobby so I don't have much knowledge about it.

The phrase 'my hobbies' should be singular 'my hobby' because it refers to one activity. Also, 'many knowledge' is incorrect; 'much knowledge' is the correct quantifier for uncountable nouns.

× But I. Know that we have to grow with regularly water it an.

✓ But I know that we have to regularly water it and

The phrase 'grow with regularly water it an' is incorrect. It should be 'regularly water it and' to express the correct action and conjunction.

× Spanning some sweet speech with them.

✓ Spraying some sweet scent on them.

The phrase 'Spanning some sweet speech with them' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'Spraying some sweet scent on them' to describe caring for plants.

× I'm not Chinese so I don't have knowledge about this problem, but I guess.

✓ I'm not Chinese so I don't have knowledge about this topic, but I guess.

The word 'problem' is incorrect in this context; 'topic' or 'subject' is more appropriate.

× In China we can send plans as gift to send best wishes for.

✓ In China we can send plants as gifts to send best wishes for.

The word 'plans' should be 'plants' and 'gift' should be plural 'gifts' to match the context.

× The receivers. As a wish of health, an wealthy.

✓ The receivers as a wish of health and wealth.

The sentence is fragmented and contains errors. It should be combined into one sentence with correct conjunctions and word forms: 'The receivers as a wish of health and wealth.'