网站— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples and a brief reason. Use linking words (for example, because) and avoid repetition.

範例: I often visit academic websites, especially ResearchGate and mathematics databases like ZB Math and AMS, because they provide papers and bibliographic records. For example, ZB Math helps me find reviews of math articles, and ResearchGate lets me follow researchers and access preprints.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence naming the site, explain specifically why you like it with correct word choices, and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words like because or so to connect ideas and correct plural/singular forms.

範例: My favourite website is Alki because it allows researchers and physicians to publish original work quickly without formal peer review. As a result, I can read new ideas and informal reports that help me stay updated on emerging methods.

建議: Answer directly and provide a brief, specific example of change or stability. Use correct tense and linking words (however, although) to present comparisons over time.

範例: Not much has changed for the main math databases; they have kept a stable structure and content. However, some sites have added better search functions and citation links in recent years, which makes literature searches easier.

建議: Avoid saying you don't know; offer a reasonable, specific answer. Use clear vocabulary and one or two examples of popular website types, with a reason and a linking word like for example or such as.

範例: In my country, social media and e-commerce sites are very popular. For example, many people use social networking apps to stay in touch, and shopping platforms are widely used because they offer convenience and fast delivery.

建議: Structure your answer: give a clear preference or say it depends, then explain with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words like firstly, secondly, or however, and choose precise vocabulary (current, updated, in-depth).

範例: It depends: for up-to-date news and recent research I prefer websites because they are fast and searchable; however, for in-depth study I prefer books, which provide structured explanations and reliable background information.

建議: Give a clear reason and one or two concrete uses for your website. Use correct verb forms and link ideas with because or so. Keep the answer within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I would like to create my own website so I can share my research and opinions on current topics. For example, I could post short articles about my math work and tutorials for students, and use a blog section to discuss trends in the field.

建議: Be specific about what you learned and provide one or two clear examples. Avoid vague labels like 'AZ generation' and use linking words (for example, for instance). Use correct sentence structure and concise wording.

範例: Most of my recent learning comes from websites. For instance, I learned mathematical techniques from online lecture notes and improved my coding skills with tutorial videos, and I also find practical life tips such as time-management strategies on blogs.

× I often visit the ResearchGate and the database of mathematics such as ZB Math and AMS.

✓ I often visit ResearchGate and the databases of mathematics such as ZB Math and AMS.

Incorrect use of the definite article 'the' before proper noun ResearchGate and singular 'database' when referring to multiple databases. Use no article with the site name ResearchGate and plural 'databases' to match examples given. Suggestion: Omit 'the' before proper names and use plural when listing multiple resources.

× There are the database of mathematics and Research gates is a blogs shared by the mathematicians around the world.

✓ There are databases of mathematics, and ResearchGate is a blog shared by mathematicians around the world.

Multiple problems: wrong article 'the', singular/plural mismatch 'database/databases', incorrect form 'Research gates' and wrong verb 'is a blogs'. Correct to plural 'databases', 'ResearchGate' (single name) and singular noun 'blog'. Suggestion: Keep subject-verb agreement and correct singular/plural forms; use correct proper noun spelling.

× I think my favorite website is Alki because it is a good platforms for the physicians and mathematics mathematicians to publish their original work without peer reviews and promote the commit.

✓ I think my favorite website is Alki because it is a good platform for physicians and mathematicians to publish their original work without peer review and to promote the community.

Errors: 'a good platforms' mixes singular article with plural noun; 'the physicians and mathematics mathematicians' has redundant/incorrect modifiers; 'peer reviews' should be uncountable 'peer review'; 'promote the commit' is incorrect word choice. Fixed to singular 'platform', removed unnecessary 'the', corrected 'mathematicians', used uncountable 'peer review', and replaced 'commit' with likely intended 'community'. Suggestion: Match articles to noun number, avoid redundant words, use correct collocations like 'peer review' and 'promote the community'.

× There isn't any changes of the archive or the database.

✓ There aren't any changes in the archive or the databases.

Subject-verb agreement with 'there is/are' and plural 'changes' requires 'aren't' not 'isn't'. Also use 'in' rather than 'of', and plural 'databases' to match earlier meaning. Suggestion: Ensure 'there is' vs 'there are' matches the following noun's number and choose correct preposition.

× I mentioned from day established to now because the websites of mathematics is very practical.

✓ I mean since their establishment until now because mathematics websites are very practical.

Awkward phrase 'mentioned from day established to now' and subject-verb disagreement 'websites ... is'. Reword to 'since their establishment until now' and make 'websites ... are'. Suggestion: Use clearer time expressions like 'since their establishment' and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I don't know exactly.

✓ I don't know exactly which ones are popular.

Elliptical answer is acceptable but incomplete; adding the object clarifies meaning to answer the question. No strict grammar error but sentence is vague. Suggestion: Provide a complete clause to be clearer.

× I think in my country there are lots of the functions it are in the Internet are deliberate to the applications.

✓ I think in my country there are many websites and Internet services designed for applications.

Multiple errors: 'lots of the functions' is incorrect; redundant 'it are'; wrong preposition and verb choice. Rewritten to convey intended meaning: many websites/Internet services designed for apps. Suggestion: Use 'many' for countable items, remove redundant pronouns, and choose appropriate verbs like 'designed'.

× That's need to divide in two situations.

✓ That needs to be divided into two situations.

Missing subject-verb agreement and passive construction needed: 'That's need' is ungrammatical. Use 'That needs to be divided into two situations' or better 'We need to distinguish two situations.' Suggestion: Use correct verb form and consider active alternative for clarity.

× Uh, for the renewed information or the current or immersed information website is better, but for a totally researched books it's better.

✓ For up-to-date or current information, websites are better, but for thoroughly researched information, books are better.

Incorrect word choices and forms: 'renewed information', 'immersed information', 'totally researched books'. Use collocations 'up-to-date', 'current', 'thoroughly researched', and plural agreement 'websites/books are'. Suggestion: Use common collocations and ensure plural agreement with general nouns.

× Yes, I would. I would like to have my own websites because I could express my ideas and showed my attitude towards some trending things and for example I could express in my way.

✓ Yes, I would. I would like to have my own website because I could express my ideas and show my attitude towards trending topics; for example, I could express them in my own way.

Errors: 'my own websites' should be singular 'website' if referring to one; tense inconsistency 'could express' then 'showed' should be 'show'; 'trending things' awkward, better 'trending topics'; 'express in my way' -> 'express them in my own way'. Suggestion: Keep consistent tense, use singular/plural appropriately, and choose natural collocations.

× Basically as AZ generation, I think the most of the knowledge I learned is from the websites.

✓ As part of the Gen Z generation, I think most of the knowledge I learn is from websites.

Errors: 'AZ generation' likely 'Gen Z'; 'the most of the knowledge I learned' mixes past and present. Use present simple 'learn' for ongoing habit and remove unnecessary 'the'. Suggestion: Use correct generational term and consistent present tense for general statements.

× For example, my mathematics knowledge. Basically uh learn from the websites and a lot of life experience.

✓ For example, my mathematics knowledge: I basically learn it from websites, and I also learn a lot from life experiences.

Fragment 'For example, my mathematics knowledge.' lacks verb. 'Basically uh learn' missing subject. Clarified with complete sentences, added subject 'I', corrected 'experience' to plural 'experiences'. Suggestion: Ensure each sentence has a subject and verb and use plural forms where appropriate.