汽车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและสมบูรณ์มากขึ้น โดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ตอบคำถามโดยตรง และเพิ่มรายละเอียดสนับสนุนที่ชัดเจน ใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำพูดที่ไม่จำเป็นหรือคำพูดที่ไม่สมบูรณ์

範例: When I was a kid, I didn't really enjoy traveling by car because I usually just slept during the trip. However, I didn't mind the travel method as long as I reached my destination safely.

建議: คำตอบควรเริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ตอบคำถามโดยตรง และใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'fill the gas' ควรเป็น 'fill up the gas' หรือ 'refuel'. เพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด และให้รายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้อง

範例: I really like electric cars because they save a lot of money. For example, you don't have to fill up gas, and you can charge them at home, which is very convenient and cost-effective.

建議: คำตอบควรชัดเจนและสมบูรณ์มากขึ้น โดยใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'passenger seat' ควรเป็น 'a passenger'. เพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล และอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน

範例: I prefer to be the driver because I feel safer when I am in control of the car. On the other hand, as a passenger, I sometimes feel uncomfortable because I cannot control the situation.

建議: คำตอบควรเริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ตอบคำถามโดยตรง และใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'a little bit straight' ควรเป็น 'a little bit stressed'. ใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด และให้รายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและเหมาะสม

範例: When there is a traffic jam, I usually feel a little stressed because I have to be careful of motorcycles and cars around me. To relax, I often listen to music while waiting.

× I think when it's what a kid I didn't care about how I travel with uh, usually when I on the car, I will sleep till we arrive at the position that we want to go.

✓ I think when I was a kid, I didn't care about how I traveled. Usually, when I was in the car, I would sleep until we arrived at the place we wanted to go.

The sentence mixes present tense ('it's') with past tense ('didn't care'). The correct past tense 'was' should be used for 'I was a kid'. Also, 'when I on the car' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was in the car'. The verb 'will sleep' should be 'would sleep' to indicate habitual past action. 'Position' is not the correct word for destination; 'place' is better.

× Nadine, I think I really like electric car because it save you a lot of money.

✓ Nadine, I think I really like electric cars because they save you a lot of money.

The noun 'electric car' should be plural 'electric cars' when speaking generally. The verb 'save' must agree with the plural subject 'cars', so 'save' is correct, but the pronoun 'it' should be 'they' to match plural 'cars'.

× You didn't have to feel the gas and you can charge anywhere, even in your home and it will save you a lot.

✓ You don't have to fill the gas and you can charge anywhere, even at your home, and it will save you a lot.

The phrase 'didn't have to feel the gas' is incorrect; it should be 'don't have to fill the gas' to indicate present tense ability. Also, 'fill' is the correct verb for adding fuel, not 'feel'. 'In your home' is better as 'at your home' or 'at home'.

× You didn't have to feel the gas and you can charge anywhere, even in your home and it will save you a lot.

✓ You don't have to fill the gas and you can charge anywhere, even at your home, and it will save you a lot.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to charging at home; 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate location.

× I think I prefer to be a driver because I feel safer.

✓ I think I prefer to be a driver because I feel safer.

This sentence is correct in present tense and needs no correction.

× When I am a driver, I think I am in control with the car, I know what I am doing.

✓ When I am the driver, I think I am in control of the car; I know what I am doing.

Use 'the driver' instead of 'a driver' to specify the role. The preposition 'with' is incorrect; 'in control of' is the correct phrase. Also, the sentence is better separated with a semicolon or period for clarity.

× When I am a driver, I think I am in control with the car, I know what I am doing.

✓ When I am the driver, I think I am in control of the car; I know what I am doing.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'in control of the car'.

× But when I am only passenger seat I didn't feel severed out but I don't like to going in.

✓ But when I am only a passenger, I don't feel scared, but I don't like going in.

The phrase 'I didn't feel severed out' is incorrect; likely intended 'scared'. Also, 'I don't like to going in' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't like going in'. The tense should be consistent in present tense as the first part is 'when I am'.

× But when I am only passenger seat I didn't feel severed out but I don't like to going in.

✓ But when I am only a passenger, I don't feel scared, but I don't like going in.

The phrase 'passenger seat' should be 'a passenger'. Also, 'severed out' is incorrect; 'scared' is appropriate. The pronoun usage is corrected to match the subject.

× What That happened a lot when I drive in the town, so when the traffic jam, it will make me a little bit straight because I have to be careful from the motorcycle and the car in front of me.

✓ That happens a lot when I drive in town, so when there is a traffic jam, it makes me a little bit stressed because I have to be careful of the motorcycles and cars in front of me.

The phrase 'What That happened' is incorrect; 'That happens' is present tense to match habitual action. 'Drive in the town' should be 'drive in town'. 'When the traffic jam' should be 'when there is a traffic jam'. 'Make me a little bit straight' is incorrect; likely meant 'stressed'. 'Careful from' should be 'careful of'. Also, plural forms 'motorcycles' and 'cars' are needed.

× What That happened a lot when I drive in the town, so when the traffic jam, it will make me a little bit straight because I have to be careful from the motorcycle and the car in front of me.

✓ That happens a lot when I drive in town, so when there is a traffic jam, it makes me a little bit stressed because I have to be careful of the motorcycles and cars in front of me.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect after 'careful'; the correct preposition is 'of'.

× I usually listen to music to calm me down.

✓ I usually listen to music to calm myself down.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is needed after 'calm' to indicate the subject is performing the action on themselves.