朋友— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời giới hạn câu trả lời trong 3-5 câu.

範例: Yes, I have a friend I have known for a long time. For example, Ling Ling has been my best friend since high school. We respect and appreciate each other a lot.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trúc rõ ràng hơn. Tránh dùng từ không đúng nghĩa và câu dài không mạch lạc. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động bạn làm với bạn bè.

範例: Usually, my friends and I like to go out to places like shopping malls or parks. We enjoy watching movies or having meals together.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không tập trung vào câu hỏi và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp nơi gặp gỡ thường xuyên và giải thích ngắn gọn về tần suất gặp bạn bè.

範例: We often meet at school or in the park. However, since I am a final year student, I am quite busy and sometimes I only meet them two or three days a week.

建議: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi nhỏ.

範例: To be honest, I often go out with my friends. We usually go to the park to talk about our lives or exercise. Sometimes, we visit entertainment centers to watch movies or go shopping.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến rõ ràng, dùng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để diễn đạt tầm quan trọng của bạn bè.

範例: I think friends are very important in life because they help me relax when I am under pressure. They also support me in difficult times.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: 'friends' thay vì 'fans') và câu trúc rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt ý tưởng mạch lạc, có liên kết giữa các câu.

範例: I prefer spending time with a group of friends because we can play board games and share many interesting stories. Also, some activities like going to a music box are better with a group.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý kiến của bạn.

範例: Not really, because my family doesn't like strangers coming to our house. I also prefer going out with friends to enjoy a fresh atmosphere rather than staying at home.

× Yes, of course I have many fans whom I have known for long time umm, for example, Ling Ling is one of my uh, best friend in high school and I wonder how can I meet the same people Lying Ivory? Respect and appreciate link.

✓ Yes, of course I have many friends whom I have known for a long time. For example, Ling Ling is one of my best friends in high school and I wonder how I can meet the same people like Ling Ling. I respect and appreciate her.

The word 'fans' should be 'friends' to match the context. 'Best friend' should be plural 'best friends' because it refers to more than one. 'For long time' needs the article 'a' to be 'for a long time'. The sentence structure 'how can I meet' should be 'how I can meet' in indirect question form. 'Lying Ivory' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'Ling Ling'. 'Respect and appreciate link' is unclear and corrected to 'I respect and appreciate her' for clarity.

× Actually we usually prefer to go outside such as visits the entertaining building like a lotta mark or wing Center.

✓ Actually, we usually prefer to go outside, such as visiting entertainment buildings like a shopping mall or a wing center.

After 'such as', the verb should be in the '-ing' form to indicate examples of activities. 'Visits' is incorrect; it should be 'visiting'. 'Entertaining building' is better expressed as 'entertainment buildings'. 'Lotta mark' is likely 'shopping mall' corrected for clarity.

× To go that planes we need to pay a lot of money to the spy in here like park or something else.

✓ To go to those places, we need to pay a lot of money to enter places like parks or something else.

The phrase 'go that planes' should be 'go to those places' to use the correct preposition and plural form. 'Pay a lot of money to the spy in here' is unclear; likely intended 'pay to enter'. 'Like park' should be 'like parks' to match plural form.

× In the bus I think I meet people every day but in the future I am a last year student so I need to learn a lot.

✓ On the bus, I think I meet people every day, but in the future, I will be a last-year student, so I need to study a lot.

The preposition 'in the bus' should be 'on the bus'. 'I am a last year student' should be 'I will be a last-year student' to indicate future tense and hyphenate 'last-year'. 'Learn a lot' is better expressed as 'study a lot' in this context.

× So one week I only have three days or two day or sometime I don't meet.

✓ So in one week, I only have three days or two days when I meet them, or sometimes I don't meet them at all.

'Two day' should be 'two days' to match plural. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; added 'when I meet them' for clarity.

× To be honestly, I usually go out with my friend.

✓ To be honest, I usually go out with my friends.

The phrase is 'to be honest', not 'to be honestly'. 'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match context.

× We usually go to the park to discuss our life or do exercise or sometime we go to the entertaining building to watch movie or buy shopping.

✓ We usually go to the park to discuss our lives or exercise, or sometimes we go to entertainment buildings to watch movies or go shopping.

'Discuss our life' should be 'discuss our lives' to match plural. 'Do exercise' is better as 'exercise'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Entertaining building' corrected to 'entertainment buildings'. 'Watch movie' should be 'watch movies'. 'Buy shopping' is incorrect; 'go shopping' is correct.

× I call that a friend is very important in our life that can help me pleasure when we under pressure and I also turn out that there are usually help me usually support.

✓ I think that friends are very important in our lives because they can help me feel pleasure when I am under pressure, and I also find that they usually help and support me.

'I call that' is incorrect; 'I think that' is better. 'A friend is' should be 'friends are' to generalize. 'In our life' should be 'in our lives'. 'Help me pleasure' is incorrect; 'help me feel pleasure' is correct. 'When we under pressure' should be 'when I am under pressure'. 'Turn out that there are usually help me usually support' is unclear; corrected to 'I also find that they usually help and support me'.

× I think I prefer to spend time with a group of fans because we can play a lot of board game and we can discuss very lot of interesting story in our life.

✓ I think I prefer to spend time with a group of friends because we can play a lot of board games and we can discuss many interesting stories in our lives.

'Fans' should be 'friends'. 'Board game' should be plural 'board games'. 'Very lot of' is incorrect; 'many' is correct. 'Interesting story' should be plural 'interesting stories'. 'Our life' should be 'our lives'.

× And especially I really want to go to the music box that music book need to a group.

✓ Especially, I really want to go to the music box because the music box requires a group.

The sentence is unclear; 'music book' is likely 'music box'. 'Need to a group' is incorrect; corrected to 'requires a group'. Added 'because' for clarity.

× Not really because my family don't want to.

✓ Not really, because my family doesn't want to.

'My family don't' should be 'my family doesn't' because 'family' is a singular collective noun.

× Their stranger people come to my house and I think we need to go out to have a fresh atmosphere than we stay in home.

✓ They don't want strangers to come to my house, and I think we need to go out to have a fresh atmosphere rather than stay at home.

'Their stranger people' is incorrect; should be 'They don't want strangers'. 'Than we stay in home' should be 'rather than stay at home'. Added missing words for clarity.