朋友— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use correct grammar and clearer sentence structures. For example, say "I have a friend whom I have known for 10 years. We met at school and our friendship has grown stronger over the years. We are like sisters rather than just friends." This will make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: I have a friend whom I have known for 10 years. We met at school and our friendship has grown stronger over the years. We are like sisters rather than just friends.

建議: Use clearer vocabulary and correct sentence structure. For example, say "We usually study together and go to the library to read books. Sometimes, we cook when we go on picnics together. This is our friendship." Also, avoid unclear phrases like "accounts" and "friend's ship."

範例: We usually study together and go to the library to read books. Sometimes, we cook when we go on picnics together. This is our friendship.

建議: Avoid confusing or unclear phrases. Instead, say "I often meet my friend at school. However, nowadays, when we want to meet, we go to places like Lespia or the Moon café because we don't have time to visit each other's homes." This makes your answer clearer and more natural.

範例: I often meet my friend at school. However, nowadays, when we want to meet, we go to places like Lespia or the Moon café because we don't have time to visit each other's homes.

建議: Use clearer and more coherent sentences. For example, say "No, I don't go out with my friends often. Sometimes we meet to study or work on projects together. When we need to chat, we do so to support each other." This improves clarity and coherence.

範例: No, I don't go out with my friends often. Sometimes we meet to study or work on projects together. When we need to chat, we do so to support each other.

建議: Improve grammar and sentence flow. For example, say "Friends are very important in my life. I believe people without friends may feel lonely. When I chat and joke with my friends, I forget my sad feelings." This makes your answer more natural and effective.

範例: Friends are very important in my life. I believe people without friends may feel lonely. When I chat and joke with my friends, I forget my sad feelings.

建議: Use clearer sentence structure and linking words. For example, say "I prefer spending time with a group of friends because we chat and do fun activities together. This helps us create happy memories that we can remember in the future." This improves coherence and clarity.

範例: I prefer spending time with a group of friends because we chat and do fun activities together. This helps us create happy memories that we can remember in the future.

建議: Clarify your reasons with better grammar. For example, say "No, I don't invite friends to my home because my mother doesn't like it. Also, I don't visit my friends' homes because I think it's not safe." This makes your answer clearer and more natural.

範例: No, I don't invite friends to my home because my mother doesn't like it. Also, I don't visit my friends' homes because I think it's not safe.

× I met them since 10 years.

✓ I have known them for 10 years.

The sentence incorrectly uses the simple past tense 'met' with 'since', which requires the present perfect tense to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Use 'have known' instead of 'met'.

× We made us in the school and our friendship is growing in this year.

✓ We met at school and our friendship has been growing this year.

'Made us' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'met' to indicate the initial meeting. Also, 'in the school' should be 'at school'. The phrase 'is growing in this year' should be 'has been growing this year' to express ongoing action in the present perfect continuous tense.

× We study together and go to library to read accounts, book and we cook sometimes when we go in picnic together.

✓ We study together and go to the library to read accounts and books, and we sometimes cook when we go on a picnic together.

'Go to library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Book' should be plural 'books' to match the context. 'Go in picnic' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go on a picnic'. Also, adverb placement corrected to 'sometimes cook'.

× This is my friend's ship.

✓ This is my friendship.

The phrase 'friend's ship' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'friendship'. Correct the word to 'friendship'.

× I often meet my friend in school, but now when I want to see my friend or meet them, I go to Lespia or to the Moon because we don't have time to visit us in the house.

✓ I often meet my friend at school, but now when I want to see my friend or meet them, I go to Lespia or to the Moon because we don't have time to visit each other at home.

'In school' should be 'at school'. 'Visit us in the house' is incorrect; it should be 'visit each other at home' to correctly express mutual visiting.

× Sometimes I meet my friend, inspire or move if we don't.

✓ Sometimes I meet my friend, or we just relax if we don't.

The phrase 'inspire or move if we don't' is unclear and likely incorrect. It should be replaced with a clearer expression such as 'or we just relax if we don't' to convey the intended meaning.

× If we need to chat with, chat with us or together.

✓ If we need to chat, we chat together.

The sentence is incomplete and confusing. 'Chat with us' is incorrect here. The corrected sentence clearly states the action and subject.

× My friends is important in my life, I think they were some who don't have a friend who will be not OK because you are chat with your friends, make jokes, fun with my friends and I forget all the sad feelings when I was talking with my friends.

✓ My friends are important in my life. I think those who don't have friends will not be okay because you chat with your friends, make jokes, have fun with them, and I forget all the sad feelings when I talk with my friends.

'Friends is' should be 'friends are' to agree in number. 'They were some who don't have a friend' is unclear and corrected to 'those who don't have friends'. Verb tenses and sentence structure are adjusted for clarity and correctness.

× I prefer to spend my time with group friends because we we chat together and do some things make us happy and you will all remember this moment in the future and say about it.

✓ I prefer to spend my time with a group of friends because we chat together and do things that make us happy, and you will all remember this moment in the future and talk about it.

'Group friends' should be 'a group of friends'. Duplicate 'we' removed. Added 'that' to connect clauses properly. 'Say about it' corrected to 'talk about it' for natural expression.

× No, I don't invite my friends in my home because my mother don't like my friends come to home or in the same I don't go to my friend's home because I think it's not a good thing and we don't have security and we should take.

✓ No, I don't invite my friends to my home because my mother doesn't like my friends coming to our house. Also, I don't go to my friend's home because I think it's not a good thing, and we don't have security, so we should be careful.

'Invite my friends in my home' should be 'invite my friends to my home'. 'Mother don't' corrected to 'mother doesn't'. 'Friends come to home' corrected to 'friends coming to our house'. Sentence restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.