朋友— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại hoàn thành để nói về khoảng thời gian quen biết và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'we are study' thành 'we study'.

範例: Yes, I have a friend named Mai whom I have known for a long time. We often have lunch together, and now we study at the same high school.

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên dùng từ đúng ngữ cảnh và cấu trúc câu hợp lý hơn. Ví dụ, 'turn home to watch them' không rõ nghĩa, nên nói rõ hoạt động xem gì.

範例: We usually hang out on weekends. We prefer to go to the supermarket to buy candies or food, then go home to watch movies together.

建議: Câu trả lời cần mạch lạc và ngữ pháp chính xác. Bạn nên dùng mạo từ 'a' trước 'coffee shop' và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, câu nên rõ ràng hơn về nội dung chia sẻ.

範例: I often meet her at a coffee shop. We spend most of our leisure time talking about our lives and sharing stories about school.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên chia câu rõ ràng, dùng từ đúng và tránh lỗi chính tả như 'straight' thay vì 'stress'.

範例: Yes, I often go out with my friends. We usually hang out at the park or go swimming, which helps me relax and feel better after stressful times at school.

建議: Câu trả lời cần ngữ pháp chính xác và từ vựng phù hợp. Bạn nên sửa lỗi như 'are so important are' và dùng danh từ đúng như 'stress' thay vì 'stressful'.

範例: In my view, friends are very important because they help me feel better and we can share the stresses in our lives.

建議: Câu trả lời cần ngữ pháp chính xác và từ vựng phù hợp. Bạn nên sửa lỗi lặp từ 'is is' và dùng danh từ đúng như 'stress' thay vì 'stressful'.

範例: I prefer to spend time with one friend because a special friend can listen to me and share my stress.

建議: Câu trả lời cần ngữ pháp chính xác và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sửa lỗi như 'Another I love cooking' thành 'Also, I love cooking' và dùng cấu trúc đúng cho 'spend time cooking'.

範例: Yes, I would. I usually invite friends to my home on weekends or during my free time. We spend time playing games or watching TV. Also, I love cooking, so we often cook together.

× I have lunch with her for a long time and now we are study in the same high school.

✓ I have had lunch with her for a long time and now we are studying in the same high school.

The verb 'study' should be in the present participle form 'studying' to correctly follow the auxiliary verb 'are' in the present continuous tense. Also, 'have lunch' should be in the present perfect 'have had lunch' to indicate an action continuing over a period of time.

× We we prefer to go to the supermarket to buy candies or foods and we turn home to watch them.

✓ We prefer to go to the supermarket to buy candies or food and then return home to watch them.

The repeated 'we' is redundant and should be removed. 'Turn home' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'return home'. Also, 'foods' is usually uncountable in this context, so 'food' is preferred. The conjunction 'and' should be followed by 'then' to indicate sequence.

× I often meet her at coffee shop.

✓ I often meet her at the coffee shop.

The noun 'coffee shop' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× We spend most of my leisure time to talk about my to talk about our life and share a story in study.

✓ We spend most of my leisure time talking about our life and sharing stories about studying.

The verb 'spend' should be followed by a gerund ('talking') not an infinitive ('to talk'). Also, 'share a story in study' is awkward; 'sharing stories about studying' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× we usually hang out to the park or the more we swim more so my time to relax my mind and it helps me feel better after the straight time in the school.

✓ We usually hang out at the park or swim more, so I have time to relax my mind and it helps me feel better after the stressful time at school.

The correct preposition with 'hang out' and 'park' is 'at', not 'to'. The sentence structure is confusing; it is corrected for clarity and grammar. 'Straight time' is incorrect; 'stressful time' is appropriate. Also, 'in the school' should be 'at school'.

× friends are so important are because our friends helped me feel better and we can share about the stressful in our life.

✓ Friends are so important because our friends help me feel better and we can share about the stress in our lives.

The verb 'helped' should be in present tense 'help' to match the present context. 'Stressful' is an adjective; the noun 'stress' is needed here. 'Life' should be plural 'lives' when referring to multiple people.

× I prefer to spend time with one friend because I think a special friend is is can listen to me and share my stressful.

✓ I prefer to spend time with one friend because I think a special friend can listen to me and share my stress.

The phrase 'is is can' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'can'. 'Stressful' is an adjective; the noun 'stress' is needed here.

× I usually invite friends to my home at the weekends or in the leisure time we spend time to play games or watch TV.

✓ I usually invite friends to my home on weekends or during leisure time; we spend time playing games or watching TV.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect with 'weekends'; 'on weekends' is correct. 'In the leisure time' should be 'during leisure time'. The phrase 'spend time to play' should be 'spend time playing' using the gerund form.

× Another I love cooking, so we spend time to cooking.

✓ Also, I love cooking, so we spend time cooking.

'Another' is incorrect here; 'Also' is appropriate. The phrase 'spend time to cooking' is incorrect; it should be 'spend time cooking' with the gerund form after 'spend time'.