朋友— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to use correct grammar and avoid confusing phrases. Also, keep your answer concise and directly answer the question with supporting details.

範例: Yes, I have a friend whom I've known since 2017. We met at school and over time, we became best friends.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many mistakes. Use simple and clear sentences to describe your activities with friends. Avoid unnecessary or confusing words.

範例: Sometimes, I go out with my friends. We often joke and tease each other for fun.

建議: Try to organize your answer logically and use correct grammar. Explain clearly where and why you meet your friends there.

範例: We usually meet at my pharmacy because I own it and have little free time. So my friends come to visit me there.

建議: Your answer is confusing and repetitive. Use simple sentences to explain your situation and how you spend time with friends.

範例: I don't often go out with my friends because I am busy with my pharmacy. Instead, they come to my place and we talk and relax together.

建議: Good attempt to express feelings. Improve grammar and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I am a friendly person, and friends are very important to me because they are kind and helpful. In fact, I consider them like a part of my family.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to express your preference clearly and give reasons using simple sentences and linking words.

範例: I prefer spending time with a group of friends because there are more topics to talk about and activities to do, unlike with one friend where the conversation ends quickly.

建議: Your answer is good but needs better grammar and clearer structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I like inviting my friends to my home because they often bring gifts, which makes me happy. Also, I can introduce them to my family, helping to build new relationships.

× Yes, I do have a friend that I've known for a long time.

✓ Yes, I have a friend that I've known for a long time.

The auxiliary verb 'do' is unnecessary here because the present perfect tense 'I've known' already indicates the action. Using 'do have' is redundant and incorrect in this context.

× And his name is clapping social grow and we are friends since we're from seeing 2017 and we made in our school so we by the time passed we become a best friends.

✓ His name is Clapping Social Grow and we have been friends since 2017 when we met at our school. Over time, we became best friends.

The sentence has multiple issues: incorrect pronoun use, wrong tense usage ('are friends since' should be 'have been friends since'), and awkward phrasing. Correcting pronouns and verb tenses clarifies the meaning.

× Sometime I go for tool and also some time in short laser time we go save each other an mocking each other.

✓ Sometimes I go for a walk and sometimes, in a short time, we tease and mock each other.

The original sentence has incorrect word choices and tense issues. 'Go for tool' is incorrect; 'go for a walk' is appropriate. 'Save each other an mocking each other' is unclear; 'tease and mock each other' fits better. Also, 'sometimes' should be plural.

× Sometime we slam each other for fun.

✓ Sometimes we tease each other for fun.

The verb 'slam' is not appropriate here; 'tease' or 'mock' fits better. Also, 'sometimes' should be plural. The preposition 'for' is correct.

× We usually meet each other in my pharmacy.

✓ We usually meet each other at my pharmacy.

The correct preposition for a specific location is 'at' rather than 'in' when referring to meeting places like a pharmacy.

× Basically I have a pharmacy so that's why I couldn't make time to meet the meet them.

✓ Basically, I have a pharmacy, so that's why I couldn't make time to meet them.

The phrase 'meet the meet them' is redundant and incorrect. Removing the extra 'meet' clarifies the sentence.

× So they just came to me and meet each other.

✓ So they just come to me and we meet each other.

The verb tense should be present simple 'come' to match the habitual action. Also, 'meet each other' is correct but needs to be connected properly.

× So as I say, I learned that I have pharmacy so that's why I couldn't make the time to go with my friends out.

✓ As I said, I have a pharmacy, so that's why I couldn't make time to go out with my friends.

The phrase 'I learned that I have pharmacy' is incorrect; 'I have a pharmacy' is correct. Also, 'go with my friends out' should be 'go out with my friends' for correct word order.

× I'll go out with my friends and that's why they just came to me and see and talking each other and go sleeping.

✓ I would go out with my friends, but they just come to me, and we see and talk to each other and then go to sleep.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and incorrect verb forms. 'See and talking' should be 'see and talk'. 'Go sleeping' should be 'go to sleep'. Also, 'I'll' is changed to 'I would' to match the context.

× I'm a friendly guy and friends are two important to me becauses there really kind.

✓ I'm a friendly guy and friends are very important to me because they are really kind.

'Two important' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'very important'. Also, 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because' and 'there' should be 'they'.

× They're really helpful to me and if I say then I could say that they're like my part of my body so.

✓ They're really helpful to me, and if I may say, I could say that they're like a part of my body.

The phrase 'if I say then I could say' is awkward; 'if I may say' is more appropriate. Also, 'like my part of my body' should be 'like a part of my body'.

× I pay for his pain time with group of friends because if I spend time with one French there no chat left a within 10 minutes.

✓ I prefer to spend time with a group of friends because if I spend time with one friend, there is no chat left within 10 minutes.

'Pay for his pain time' is incorrect; 'prefer to spend time' is correct. 'Group of friends' needs an article 'a'. 'French' should be 'friend'. 'There no chat left a' is incorrect; 'there is no chat left' is correct.

× But if I to convert if I make conversation with group of friends then their loss of topic that I can explain and also loss of thing I can do and they are just can I can hear.

✓ But if I have a conversation with a group of friends, then there are lots of topics I can explain and many things I can do, and I can just listen.

The original sentence is confusing and has multiple errors: 'to convert' should be 'have a conversation'; 'their loss of topic' should be 'lots of topics'; 'loss of thing' should be 'many things'; 'they are just can I can hear' should be 'I can just listen'.

× Yes, I would really like to invite my friends to my home 'cause if I invite them then they just bring something to me that makes me happy and also I can introduce my friends to my family and they can they can create a new relationship with my parents so.

✓ Yes, I would really like to invite my friends to my home because if I invite them, they bring something that makes me happy. Also, I can introduce my friends to my family, and they can create new relationships with my parents.

The sentence has run-on issues and repeated phrases ('they can they can'). Also, 'cause' should be 'because' in formal speech. Breaking into shorter sentences improves clarity.