广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答应更直接且结构清晰：先给出主题句（是/否），接着用一两句具体细节说明为何印象深刻（例如广告里的人物、情节或音乐），最后用一句总结。注意语法（时态和数量词）与流畅性，避免填充词如“uh”或重复。可练习用简单连词（because, so, when）连接句子。

範例: Yes. A cartoon toy advertisement impressed me when I was a child because it had a catchy song and a memorable character. The toy looked very colorful and the ad showed children happily playing together, which made me want it. I still remember the character’s name and the tune.

建議: 回答要简洁有条理：先给肯定或否定，再用一两条具体例子说明你在交通工具上常见的广告类型及其特点，使用连词（for example, such as, because）使语意连贯。注意词汇选择（trends→trains; describe→explain）和语法，避免重复。

範例: Yes, I often see advertising on trains and buses. For example, there are many posters for restaurants and household products that highlight tasty food or useful features. These ads usually use bright images and short slogans to attract commuters.

建議: 回答应更具体并用例子支持观点：先表明喜欢或不喜欢，然后解释原因（例如创意、有趣或信息量大），并举一两个具体例子说明何种广告会吸引你。避免含糊表达和重复，注意词汇准确性（quotes, survives→unclear，use words like creative, entertaining）。

範例: Yes, I like some advertisements because they are creative and fun. For instance, a clever TV commercial with humor or a touching story can make me remember the brand and want to try the product. Conversely, I dislike repetitive or intrusive ads.

建議: 回答要明确并提供具体特征：先直接说明喜欢哪类广告（creative, informative, humorous），接着说明原因并给出对比（为什么不喜欢烦人的广告）。用准确词汇（property service→unclear; use ‚product ads, service ads, creative campaigns'）并简洁表达。

範例: I prefer creative and informative advertisements because they catch my attention and explain the product’s benefits. For example, a well-made commercial that uses humor or a clear demonstration of a product’s features is appealing to me. I dislike intrusive, repetitive ads that interrupt my experience.

建議: 回答要具体并举例说明出现场景和频率：先回答频率（yes, very often），然后说明常见广告类型（video ads, banner ads）和举一两个具体例子（restaurant, tech products）。注意语法与句子连贯，避免模糊表达（e.g. 'most impressive is iPhone 17'应说明为什么印象深刻）。

範例: Yes, I often see ads when I use my phone or computer, especially before online videos and as banners on websites. For instance, I frequently see restaurant ads showing delicious dishes and tech ads introducing new phones like the iPhone 17 with its new camera features.

× Definitely is when I was kids.

✓ Definitely, it was when I was a kid.

原句中“kids”与句子主语不一致，且缺少主语和系动词。应使用单数“a kid”来表示“我小时候”，并加上主语“it”和过去式“was”以构成完整句子。建议：使用完整的主语+系动词结构，并注意单复数一致。

× A cartoon toy advertisement impresses me in childhood and I see many advertisements on trends, mostly about food and daily products.

✓ A cartoon toy advertisement impressed me in my childhood, and I saw many advertisements about trends, mostly for food and daily products.

时态需要与描述的过去经历一致，故将“impresses”改为过去式“impressed”。短语“in childhood”更自然为“in my childhood”。“on trends”用法不当，应为“about trends”或省略；“about food and daily products”改为“for food and daily products”。建议：保持时态一致，使用正确介词搭配。

× I This advertisement is impressive for me.

✓ This advertisement was impressive to me.

原句有重复“I This”，且时态应为过去。使用“impressive to me”比“impressive for me”更自然。建议：避免重复词，确保代词位置和时态正确。

× I think it's very interesting, so give uh, I remembers.

✓ I think it was very interesting, so I remember it.

“remembers”是第三人称单数形式，但主语是“I”，应使用第一人称形式“remember”。同时时态统一为过去式“was”。建议：注意动词与主语人称一致，并保持时态一致。

× Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport? Student: MMM, sure. I see many advertisements on trends mostly about food and daily products, which will introduce how what's the foods is delicious and the daily products have many have more convenience and have more functions you if you will buy and then they this.

✓ Yes, I see many advertisements on trains and other transport, mostly about food and daily products, which describe how the food is delicious and how daily products are more convenient and have more functions if you buy them.

原句中“on trends”应为“on trains”或“on transport”；句子结构混乱，介词和从句使用不当。将“which will introduce how what's the foods is delicious”改为“which describe how the food is delicious”，并把“have many have more convenience”改为“are more convenient”以及补全“buy them”。建议：检查介词拼写（trains vs trends），简化从句并用正确动词和代词。

× If some advertisement is is very fan fantastic and it will attract you to look at these products something like you will you will buy some some things because of.

✓ If some advertisements are very fun or fantastic, they will attract you to look at the products, and you may buy some of them because of that.

原句代词和数不一致，“some advertisement”应为“some advertisements”；重复“is is”“you will you will”需删去。用“they”指代复数广告，用“some of them”指代物品。建议：保持代词与先行词在人称和数上的一致，去除重复。

× I was interested in creative property service advertisements because they are interesting and promote positive energy.

✓ I am interested in creative property-service advertisements because they are interesting and promote positive energy.

根据上下文学生应表达一般喜好，使用现在时“am interested”。“property service”作为复合形容词应用连字符“property-service”。建议：根据语境选择合适时态并正确连接复合形容词。

× I hate annoying advertisements because I think it's very boring and it's not not not attracted to me.

✓ I hate annoying advertisements because I think they are very boring and they do not attract me.

“it's not not not attracted to me”语法和用词错误，应为“they do not attract me”；“advertisements”为复数，用“they”。建议：避免重复否定，使用主动语态表达“吸引”更清晰。

× I love to have a greatest properties advertisements because it very easy.

✓ I like great property advertisements because they are very easy to understand.

原句语序混乱且形容词比较级“greatest”不合上下文，主语单复数及代词不一致。改为“great property advertisements”并补全谓语“are”与补语“easy to understand”。建议：注意形容词顺序与比较级用法，保持主谓一致。

× When I look at videos, I always see some advertisements. It is to introduce the products such as which restaurant is very delicious and which products more functions and are you the most impressive for me is introduced iPhone 17. It is re introduced.

✓ When I watch videos, I always see some advertisements introducing products, such as which restaurants are very good and which products have more functions. The most impressive one for me was the introduction of the iPhone 17; it was reintroduced.

“look at videos”更自然为“watch videos”。需将描述产品的句子简化并用复数一致，“which restaurant is very delicious”改为“which restaurants are very good”，并将“which products more functions”改为“which products have more functions”。最后关于“iPhone 17”的描述应用过去式并明确“reintroduced”的对象。建议：使用自然搭配(watch videos)，保持时态和主谓一致，简化表达使句子更连贯。