广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, when I was a child, gaming advertisements on TV made a strong impression on me. They showed exciting games that I really wanted to play, even though they were quite expensive. These ads motivated me to save money to buy the games. Overall, they influenced my childhood interests significantly.

建議: Your answer is somewhat relevant but contains unclear phrases and hesitations. Try to use correct grammar and vocabulary, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains nowadays. For example, digital screens display various ads to passengers while they travel. I think this is an effective way to reach many people because commuters usually pay attention to these screens during their journey.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and incomplete thoughts. Try to express your opinion clearly with a topic sentence and explain your reasons with specific examples. Avoid repeating words and filler sounds.

範例: I don't like advertisements very much because they often interrupt videos on YouTube and social media. These ads can be annoying and sometimes make me want to buy things impulsively. Therefore, I usually try to skip them whenever possible.

建議: Your answer has good content but is affected by grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and use correct verb tenses. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Although I generally don't like advertisements, I enjoy sports advertisements. Since I have played basketball for ten years, I find basketball brand ads exciting to watch. They often feature famous players and motivate me to improve my skills.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and hesitations. Try to speak more fluently and use correct sentence structures. Provide a clear topic sentence and specific supporting details with linking words.

範例: Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone or computer, especially on social media platforms. For example, YouTube shows ads that last about one minute each, which I find quite annoying because they interrupt my viewing experience.

× When I was a child, I think the gaming advertisements, the, uh, broadcast and told on TV is really meaningful and impression for me because when I sell, when I watch the advertisement, I think I want to do the game.

✓ When I was a child, I think the gaming advertisements broadcasted and told on TV were really meaningful and impressive for me because when I saw, when I watched the advertisement, I thought I wanted to play the game.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'broadcast and told' instead of the past participle 'broadcasted' and 'told' is not appropriate here; 'broadcasted' is the correct past participle for 'broadcast'. Also, 'is' should be 'were' to agree with plural 'advertisements' and past tense context. 'Impression' should be 'impressive' as an adjective describing the advertisements. 'When I sell' is incorrect; it should be 'when I saw' to indicate past tense of 'see'. 'I want to do the game' is incorrect; it should be 'I wanted to play the game' to match past tense and correct verb usage.

× I see many advertisement on trains these days.

✓ I see many advertisements on trains these days.

The word 'advertisement' is singular, but 'many' requires a plural noun. Therefore, 'advertisement' should be changed to 'advertisements' to agree in number.

× There are many digital advertisement screen, which, which brought across a lot of advertisements on for people who, who light on the food, take the train.

✓ There are many digital advertisement screens, which bring across a lot of advertisements for people who ride on the train.

'Advertisement screen' should be plural 'advertisement screens' to agree with 'many'. 'Brought' is past tense but the context suggests present tense 'bring'. The phrase 'on for people who, who light on the food, take the train' is incorrect; it should be 'for people who ride on the train'. 'Light on the food' is unclear and likely a mishearing or misstatement.

× And I think it's really, uh, work, uh, helpful to, uh, effective way to.

✓ And I think it's really a helpful and effective way to do so.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper verb structure. Adding 'a helpful and effective way to do so' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× I hate advertisement because when I watch YouTube or some social media application, uh, sometimes, uh, advertisements, uh, showing up and I think it's really destructive, uh, for me and it's annoying and which, uh, leads me impressive, impressive, uh, buying.

✓ I hate advertisements because when I watch YouTube or some social media applications, sometimes advertisements show up and I think it's really distracting for me and it's annoying and it leads me to impulsive buying.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match the context. 'Social media application' should be plural 'applications'. 'Advertisements showing up' should be 'advertisements show up' to use correct verb form. 'Destructive' is incorrect here; 'distracting' fits better. 'Leads me impressive buying' is incorrect; it should be 'leads me to impulsive buying' to express the intended meaning.

× Toby Morris I don't like advertisement, but if I say 1.

✓ To be honest, I don't like advertisements, but if I had to say one,

The original sentence is unclear and incorrectly uses 'Toby Morris' and 'say 1'. It should be rephrased for clarity and correct pronoun and article usage.

× I like sports advertisement because I have play basketball for 10 years since when I was a child.

✓ I like sports advertisements because I have played basketball for 10 years since I was a child.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match 'sports'. 'Have play' is incorrect; it should be 'have played' (present perfect tense). 'Since when I was a child' is redundant; 'since I was a child' is correct.

× So I like to watch some basketball sports brands advertisement which is really excited to watch about that.

✓ So I like to watch some basketball sports brand advertisements which are really exciting to watch.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'. 'Is really excited' is incorrect; it should be 'are really exciting' to describe the advertisements. 'To watch about that' is unnecessary and awkward.

× So that's why I like to support advertisement.

✓ So that's why I like to support advertisements.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match the context.

× Yes, I do. When I use phone I some I often you watch advertisements especially on social media.

✓ Yes, I do. When I use my phone, I often watch advertisements, especially on social media.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words ('I some I often you'). It should be corrected for clarity and proper sentence structure.

× When I especially using social media for example, I watch YouTube advertisement appeared in one minutes, did 1 minutes each in in each one minutes.

✓ Especially when I use social media, for example, I watch YouTube advertisements that appear every one minute, each lasting one minute.

'When I especially using' is incorrect; it should be 'Especially when I use'. 'Advertisement appeared in one minutes' is incorrect; it should be 'advertisements that appear every one minute'. 'Did 1 minutes each in in each one minutes' is unclear and corrected to 'each lasting one minute'.

× So I think it's really annoying.

✓ So I think it's really annoying.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.