广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有點不自然且語法錯誤，建議用更清楚且簡潔的句子來表達你的想法，並避免重複。可以先直接回答問題，再用具體細節支持。

範例: Yes, I remember an advertisement about a magnet when I was a child. I found it fascinating because it showed magnets floating in the sky, which seemed very magical to me.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤且表達不夠流暢，建議使用連接詞使句子更連貫，並提供更具體的細節。

範例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains. For example, when I took the train to Hualien, I noticed ads about high schools and travel information, which were quite informative.

建議: 回答有點口語化且不夠流暢，建議用更正式且完整的句子表達意見，並避免語助詞過多。

範例: It depends on the type of advertisement. I like ads that interest me, but I dislike political advertisements because I find them annoying.

建議: 回答內容豐富，但句子結構有些重複，建議使用連接詞和多樣詞彙使表達更自然。

範例: I definitely like travel advertisements because I enjoy traveling. For instance, I want to visit Japan since it is beautiful and offers a chance to explore its unique culture.

建議: 回答不清楚且充滿語助詞，建議直接回答問題並用簡潔句子說明原因，避免重複和不必要的填充詞。

範例: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer because advertising is a major way for companies to promote their products and earn money nowadays.

× I remember a lot of advertisement is about a magnet and I really was into it because I was thinking.

✓ I remember a lot of advertisements were about magnets and I really was into them because I was thinking.

The word 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match 'a lot of'. Also, 'is' should be 'were' to agree with plural subject and past tense context. 'Magnet' should be plural 'magnets' to match the plural 'advertisements'. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'advertisements'. In English (Taiwan): 'a lot of'後面要接複數名詞，動詞也要和主詞複數一致，過去式要用were，代名詞也要和先行詞數量一致。

× Thinking of it is very cool because the magnet can be somehow in the sky.

✓ Thinking about it is very cool because the magnet can somehow be in the sky.

The correct preposition after 'thinking' is 'about' not 'of'. Also, 'can be somehow' is better as 'can somehow be' for natural word order. In English (Taiwan): 'think'後面接介系詞通常用'about'，副詞'somehow'位置要放在助動詞和主要動詞之間。

× Yes, I saw a lot of land and when I was taking the train to the Hualien, I saw the advertisement about the current schools for the high school students and also some traveling information on them and I think it it was quite a lot.

✓ Yes, I saw a lot of ads and when I was taking the train to Hualien, I saw advertisements about the current schools for high school students and also some travel information on them and I think there were quite a lot.

'a lot of land' is incorrect here; likely meant 'a lot of ads' or 'advertisements'. 'the Hualien' should be just 'Hualien' as place names usually don't take 'the'. 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match 'a lot'. 'traveling information' is better as 'travel information'. 'it it was' is a typo; corrected to 'there were' to agree with plural subject. In English (Taiwan): 'a lot of'後面要接複數名詞，地名前通常不加'the'，'travel information'比'traveling information'更自然，動詞要和主詞數量一致。

× If the advertisements are attracting me, of course I like the advertisements, but if the advertisement is about something like the, uh, political ads, I will.

✓ If the advertisements are attracting me, of course I like the advertisements, but if the advertisement is about something like political ads, I will not.

The sentence ends abruptly; adding 'not' completes the negative meaning. Also, 'the' before 'political ads' is unnecessary. In English (Taiwan): 句尾要完整表達意思，否定句要有'not'，'the'在此處不需要。

× I like to go the Japan because I think Japan is very beautiful and is a good place to to go and just explore more deeply and just see the different culture from Japan.

✓ I like to go to Japan because I think Japan is very beautiful and is a good place to go and just explore more deeply and just see the different culture of Japan.

The preposition 'to' is needed after 'go'. 'the Japan' is incorrect; country names usually don't take 'the'. 'different culture from Japan' is better as 'different culture of Japan'. In English (Taiwan): 'go'後面要加' to '，國家名稱前通常不加'the'，'culture of Japan'比'culture from Japan'更自然。

× The question just like uh, what you just mentioned about on the chant or the, any transportations, of course, because uh, advertisements are the umm, most umm, of the things nowadays and umm, it's about marketing and everybody need to uh, make the money from the ads and you can.

✓ The question is just like, uh, what you just mentioned about on the train or any transportation, of course, because, uh, advertisements are, umm, most of the things nowadays and, umm, it's about marketing and everybody needs to, uh, make money from the ads and you can.

'chant' should be 'train'. 'transportations' is uncountable, so 'transportation' is correct. 'everybody need' should be 'everybody needs' for subject-verb agreement. 'make the money' should be 'make money' without 'the'. Added missing verb 'is' after 'The question'. In English (Taiwan): 單字拼寫要正確，'transportation'不可數，主詞'everybody'要用第三人稱單數動詞，'make money'不加冠詞，句子要有動詞。