广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊且语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地描述广告内容和印象，避免无意义的词汇。

範例: Yes, there was an advertisement that impressed me as a child. It had a catchy song that everyone liked, and it was very popular at that time.

建議: 回答较为完整，但句子结构单一，建议使用连接词丰富表达，使内容更连贯。

範例: Yes, I often see advertisements on public transport, and usually they are government campaigns that educate citizens about rules, which helps build trust in the government.

建議: 表达基本清楚，但语法和用词有误，建议注意时态和冠词的正确使用，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I don't really like advertisements in general. However, if the advertisement is about something I am interested in, I enjoy watching it; otherwise, I usually skip it.

建議: 回答重复且用词不准确，建议直接说明喜欢的广告类型，并使用准确的词汇。

範例: I like advertisements related to technology, such as those about smartphones or computers, because I find digital products interesting.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免语法错误和不完整句子。

範例: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer because companies use them to make money and promote their products to people.

× Yes, and let's inspire the in advance.

✓ Yes, let me explain in advance.

原句结构混乱，'let's inspire the in advance'没有明确的主语和宾语，导致句子不通顺。建议使用'let me explain in advance'表达提前说明的意思。

× other advisements impressed me for a while is because the song was really.

✓ Other advertisements impressed me for a while because the song was really good.

原句中'for a while is because'搭配错误，且'song was really'后缺少形容词。应去掉'is'，并补充形容词使句子完整。

× The rooms are really hot.

✓ The rooms were really hot.

根据上下文，描述过去的情况，动词时态应为过去式。

× I don't know how to stay, but it is really popular.

✓ I don't know how to stay, but it was really popular.

时态不一致，前半句为现在时，后半句应与上下文保持过去时态一致。

× Yes, and usually it is government advertisements for educating the citizens to follow the rules and try to make them feel confident with the government.

✓ Yes, usually there are government advertisements educating citizens to follow the rules and trying to make them feel confident in the government.

'confident with the government'应改为'confident in the government'，介词使用错误。

× Not really. It depends on what I really interested in about.

✓ Not really. It depends on what I am really interested in.

缺少动词be，且'what I really interested in about'结构不正确，应为'what I am really interested in'。

× For example, if it is a advertisement that I was interested in, I would enjoy it, but if it's not I think I just will skip that advertisement.

✓ For example, if it is an advertisement that I am interested in, I would enjoy it, but if it's not, I think I will just skip that advertisement.

'a advertisement'应为'an advertisement'，冠词使用错误；时态应保持一致，'I was interested'改为'I am interested'。

× Just like what I mentioned, I'm like the advisors that I'm interested in, for example, like smartphones or computers, like the digital stuffs.

✓ Just like I mentioned, I like the advertisements that I'm interested in, for example, smartphones or computers, like digital stuff.

'I'm like the advisors'应为'I like the advertisements'，代词和词汇使用错误；'digital stuffs'中'stuffs'不可数，应为'stuff'。

× Yes. Yes, definitely, because for nowadays companies have to makes money from the advertisements and also in other hands companies need advertisements to advocates the peoples or individuals that.

✓ Yes, definitely, because nowadays companies have to make money from advertisements, and also on the other hand, companies need advertisements to advocate to people or individuals.

'have to makes'中动词形式错误，应为'make'；'in other hands'应为'on the other hand'；'advocates'应为'verb'形式'advocate'；'peoples'应为'people'。