广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱，建议简化句子并使用更自然的表达方式，同时避免重复和冗余。

範例: Yes, I remember an advertisement from a traditional snack company called Wang Wang. It had a very catchy slogan and colorful visuals, which made it easy for me to remember even now.

建議: 回答表达不够清晰，存在语法错误和重复，建议使用更简洁明了的句子，并且注意语法的正确性。

範例: Yes, I often see advertisements on trains and other transport. Advertisers try to make their ads visible to as many people as possible so that their products are memorable.

建議: 回答中有较多口语填充词，影响流畅度，建议减少“uh”等词的使用，表达更简洁自然。

範例: Honestly, I usually dislike advertisements because they interrupt me. However, I enjoy funny and creative ads.

建議: 句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子来表达观点。

範例: I like advertisements that use humor and creativity. They not only show the products but also reflect the company's culture.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯，建议简化句子，避免重复，并注意语法正确。

範例: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer. With the rapid development of the digital era, more people use these devices, so ads are unavoidable.

× I remember an advertisement made by an A traditional snack company called Wang Wang.

✓ I remember an advertisement made by a traditional snack company called Wang Wang.

冠词“a”后面不应该跟大写字母“A”，且“a”用于辅音音素开头的单词前，故应改为“a traditional”。

× It has the very impressive and attractive slogan so that I can also even now remember what is the advertisement about.

✓ It has a very impressive and attractive slogan so that even now I can remember what the advertisement is about.

“the very impressive”应改为不定冠词“a very impressive”，且“even now”位置应靠近动词以符合英语习惯，句子结构需调整。

× There are some visual images and very creative colors so.

✓ There are some visual images and very creative colors.

句尾“so”无意义且导致句子结构不完整，应删除。

× I think advertising now is about how to let all the customers to see your advertisement no matter what, no matter how well the advertisement E advertisements are.

✓ I think advertising now is about how to let all the customers see your advertisement no matter what, no matter how good the advertisements are.

“let”后接动词原形，故“to see”应改为“see”；“how well”应改为“how good”来修饰名词“advertisements”；“advertisement E advertisements”疑为笔误，改为“advertisements”。

× I guess that is the strategy that make everyone so impressive so that everyone can remember the products.

✓ I guess that is the strategy that makes everyone so impressed so that everyone can remember the products.

主语“strategy”是单数，谓语动词应为“makes”；“impressive”形容词用错，应为“impressed”表示人的感受。

× it is when the advertisement came to your mind, you will feel like that you are getting interrupted

✓ when the advertisement comes to your mind, you will feel like you are being interrupted

句子时态不一致，描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时“comes”；“getting interrupted”应改为被动进行时“being interrupted”。

× for some funny and, uh, creative advertisement, I would not say no to them.

✓ for some funny and creative advertisements, I would not say no to them.

“advertisement”应为复数“advertisements”，且逗号后不应有多余的“uh”。

× Well, I like that to advertisement with some funny and humor images inside because it is not just showing their products they are getting to, they are put some creations in it.

✓ Well, I like advertisements with some funny and humorous images inside because they are not just showing their products; they put some creativity into them.

“that to advertisement”结构错误，应为“advertisements”；“humor”应为形容词“humorous”；句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整代词使用。

× And it is not only just advertisement, it is the cultural value of the company.

✓ And it is not just an advertisement; it represents the cultural value of the company.

“not only just advertisement”表达不自然，应改为“not just an advertisement”；句子需明确主谓关系。

× As for the rapid, rapid development of digital era, I guess, uh, it is a more appealing to put the advertisement on your phone or computer

✓ As for the rapid development of the digital era, I guess it is more appealing to put advertisements on your phone or computer

“digital era”前需加定冠词“the”；“a more appealing”中“a”多余；“advertisement”应为复数“advertisements”。

× because there are more and more people using phone and computer uh, that that's making it uh, more and more unavoidable to see your advertisement.

✓ because there are more and more people using phones and computers, which makes it more and more unavoidable to see advertisements.

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