广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够流畅的问题，且有重复和犹豫词汇。建议加强句子结构的准确性，避免使用“uh”等犹豫词，并且使表达更自然连贯。

範例: Yes, I remember an advertisement from my childhood that emphasized the importance of children taking care of their parents and grandparents. I found it very educational and meaningful because it taught family values.

建議: 回答过于简短且用词不够自然，'ubiquitous'用法不当。建议使用更自然的表达，并补充具体细节使回答更丰富。

範例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and in the underground. They are usually large and colorful, which makes them hard to miss.

建議: 回答中有重复词汇且表达不够流畅，语法错误较多。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并用更自然的表达方式。

範例: I don't really like advertisements because I prefer to make my own decisions when buying new things instead of relying on what ads say.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰且重复。建议简化句子，避免重复，并用更准确的词汇表达观点。

範例: I like food advertisements because they help me learn about tasty and delicious dishes, which sometimes encourages me to try new foods.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够简洁。建议使用更自然的句式，避免重复，并增加连贯性。

範例: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on my phone. Whenever I use different apps, ads usually pop up on the screen.

× Well, I remember that there was, uh, advertisement about family and in this advertisement, children should look after their parents, so, and grandparents.

✓ Well, I remember that there was, uh, an advertisement about family and in this advertisement, children should look after their parents and grandparents.

这里的'advertisement'是可数名词，前面需要加不定冠词'an'。缺少冠词会导致语法错误。

× Well, it is ubiquitous to see that substantial advertisements in the underground.

✓ Well, it is ubiquitous to see substantial advertisements in the underground.

句中'that'用法不当，应该去掉。'advertisements'是复数，前面不需要'that'限定。

× Well, I'm not really into advertisement because I believe I I tend to buy new things from my own opinion rather than depend on the advertisement recommendation.

✓ Well, I'm not really into advertisements because I believe I tend to buy new things based on my own opinion rather than depend on advertisement recommendations.

'advertisement'和'recommendation'均为可数名词，复数形式更合适。

× Well, I'm not really into advertisement because I believe I I tend to buy new things from my own opinion rather than depend on the advertisement recommendation.

✓ Well, I'm not really into advertisements because I believe I tend to buy new things based on my own opinion rather than depend on advertisement recommendations.

短语应为'based on my own opinion'，而不是'from my own opinion'，前者表示依据，后者用法不当。

× Well, As for me, I prefer to some food advertising because it is a good way to let me know how what kind of food is delectable and delicious.

✓ Well, as for me, I prefer some food advertising because it is a good way to let me know what kind of food is delectable and delicious.

'prefer to some'结构错误，正确用法是'prefer some'。此外，'how what kind of'重复，应简化为'what kind of'。

× Well, As for me, I prefer to some food advertising because it is a good way to let me know how what kind of food is delectable and delicious.

✓ Well, as for me, I prefer some food advertising because it is a good way to let me know what kind of food is delectable and delicious.

'prefer to some'中的' to '是不必要的，'prefer'后直接接名词即可。

× So I tend to get a more delectable food supply advertising.

✓ So I tend to get more delectable food supply advertising.

'a more'与不可数名词'food supply advertising'搭配不当，应去掉冠词'a'。

× Absolutely yes there are.

✓ Absolutely, yes, there are.

句中缺少逗号，影响语义清晰。

× There are numerous advertisements in on my phone.

✓ There are numerous advertisements on my phone.

介词'in on'重复，应只用'on'表示设备上的广告。