广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如时态错误和单复数错误。建议注意时态一致性，使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复。

範例: Yes, when I was a child, I often saw an advertisement about ice cream. It featured a young boy holding an ice cream and saying, "That's yummy!" This ad left a strong impression on me.

建議: 回答中表达不够清晰，词汇使用不准确，且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇，减少口头语，并且结构更连贯。

範例: Yes, I often see advertisements on public transport, such as on the sides of trains, taxis, and buses. For example, I have seen ads for a company called Vector displayed on these vehicles.

建議: 回答语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并且表达观点时更具体。

範例: No, I don't like advertisements because video ads often make me wait before watching the content I want. This wastes my time and can be very annoying.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议用更准确的词汇描述广告特点，并且句子结构更完整。

範例: I prefer video advertisements because they include images and sound, which make the product more appealing and engaging to watch.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意冠词使用，减少口头语，并且用更流畅的句子表达观点。

範例: Yes, I see many advertisements on my phone and computer. For example, when I open an app, there is usually a short video ad lasting three to five seconds, which I find quite annoying.

× When I was a child I always see an advertisement about ice cream.

✓ When I was a child I always saw an advertisement about ice cream.

句子描述过去的习惯动作，应该使用过去时态。这里的see应改为过去式saw。

× A children hold a ice cream in her hands and say that's yummy.

✓ A child holds an ice cream in her hands and says that's yummy.

children是复数，前面用不定冠词a不合适，应该用单数child。hold和say要与单数主语child保持一致，改为holds和says。ice cream前面用an而不是a，因为发音以元音开头。

× I always see some advertising on the transfer, like uh, on the two sides of the track and the back sides of some taxi, umm, or on the train.

✓ I always see some advertising on the transfer, like uh, on the two sides of the track and the back sides of some taxis, umm, or on the train.

taxi应使用复数形式taxis，因为指多个出租车。

× Yes, there are a lot of advertisement on my phone and computer.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of advertisements on my phone and computer.

advertisement应使用复数形式advertisements，因为前面有a lot of，表示很多。

× For example, when I would umm, open a app, there has uh umm, picture about three or five uh, seconds to uh, for the advertisement.

✓ For example, when I open an app, there is a picture for about three or five seconds for the advertisement.

a app应改为an app，因为app发音以元音开头。there has应改为there is，主语是单数picture。句子结构调整使表达更自然。

× There was some advertising for the uh. Vector.

✓ There was some advertising for the uh, Vector.

句子中标点符号使用不当，句号应改为逗号，使句子连贯。虽然不是严格的语法错误，但影响理解。