广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は直接質問に答えていますが、内容があいまいで具体性に欠けています。より具体的な例や理由を加え、回答を5文以内にまとめて自然で効果的な英語にすることをおすすめします。

範例: I don't recall any particular advertisement from my childhood because I watched many TV programs and didn't pay much attention to ads. However, I do remember some colorful commercials that caught my eye occasionally.

建議: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より流暢で論理的な回答に改善しましょう。

範例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on public transportation like the MRT. Companies use these campaigns to promote new products, which attract passengers' attention effectively.

建議: 回答は内容が明確で、対比を使って効果的に表現していますが、文法の誤りと語彙の選択に改善の余地があります。より正確な表現と自然な語彙を使いましょう。

範例: I like advertisements depending on their content. Some are boring and fail to keep my interest, but others are creative and funny, which makes them very engaging.

建議: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法ミスや不自然な表現があります。接続詞を使い、文を整理してより自然で効果的な回答にしましょう。

範例: I enjoy advertisements that are like short dramas because they creatively and humorously explain new products. As a result, these products become more memorable to me.

建議: 回答は内容が具体的ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現があります。接続詞を使い、文を簡潔にまとめて自然な英語に改善しましょう。

範例: Yes, I see advertisements very often, especially when I scroll through social media platforms like Instagram and Facebook. Even when I use an online dictionary, ads pop up on the screen.

× I don't remember any specific advertisement.

✓ I don't remember any specific advertisements.

The word 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' because 'any' is used with plural countable nouns in negative sentences to indicate an indefinite number of items.

× I didn't focus on those advertisement.

✓ I didn't focus on those advertisements.

The demonstrative pronoun 'those' refers to plural nouns, so 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to agree in number.

× I do see a lot of advertisement on those TRA public transportation, especially on MRT.

✓ I do see a lot of advertisements on those TRA public transportation, especially on MRT.

The phrase 'a lot of' is followed by a plural noun 'advertisements' when referring to countable items.

× Many companies will promote their new products through those campaigns or advertisement making people get in.

✓ Many companies will promote their new products through those campaigns or advertisements making people get in.

The word 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match the plural 'campaigns' and maintain parallel structure.

× some advertisements are really creative and funny, making people engaging.

✓ some advertisements are really creative and funny, making people engaged.

The verb 'engage' should be in the past participle form 'engaged' to correctly describe the state of people caused by the advertisements.

× Think I enjoy advertisement that are like short dramas because they usually use creative and funny way to express and explain their new products.

✓ I think I enjoy advertisements that are like short dramas because they usually use creative and funny ways to express and explain their new products.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to agree with 'that are'. Also, 'way' should be plural 'ways' because it refers to multiple methods.

× Yes, very often, especially when I scrolling on my phone and there are lots of advertisement on social media platforms like Instagram, Facebook.

✓ Yes, very often, especially when I am scrolling on my phone and there are lots of advertisements on social media platforms like Instagram, Facebook.

The verb 'scrolling' needs the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense 'I am scrolling'. Also, 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'.