广告— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
考生
Well, it was an advertisement about a type of candy. What left a deep impression on me was its visual effect and vivid picture, so I still remember it today.
考官
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
考生
Yes, I can see a lot of advertisements every day on transports, especially on the subway and buses. They usually show some new movies and products and it changes every day, so we can see many new things.
考官
Do you like advertisements?
考生
To be honest, I dislike it, especially when I watching TV shows. I feel I'm disturbed by some irrelevant things which makes me feel annoyed.
考官
What kind of advertising do you like?
考生
I like those advertisements which are related to my life or something equipped with innovation and creativity, which can teach us, teach me some knowledge.
考官
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
考生
Yes, I often see many advertisements on my phone when I watch videos on TikTok. I feel I'm disturbed by some irrelevant things and it brings brings me bad experience.
評估
總分
Part 1
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答较为简洁，但缺少具体细节和连贯的连接词。建议增加对广告内容的具体描述，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
範例: Yes, there was a candy advertisement that impressed me deeply because of its bright colors and catchy music. Moreover, the characters in the ad were very lively, which made it memorable for me.
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
分數: 80.0建議: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构稍显简单。建议使用更多连接词和丰富词汇，使表达更自然流畅。
範例: Yes, I often see numerous advertisements on public transport, especially on subways and buses. These ads usually promote new movies and products, and since they change frequently, passengers can always discover something new.
Do you like advertisements?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误，且表达较为简单。建议注意语法正确性，丰富表达，并使用连接词。
範例: To be honest, I dislike advertisements, especially when I watch TV shows. They often interrupt the program with irrelevant content, which annoys me a lot.
What kind of advertising do you like?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答表达不够流畅，句子结构重复。建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达方式，并增加具体例子。
範例: I prefer advertisements that relate to my daily life and showcase creativity. For example, ads that introduce new technology or provide useful information catch my attention.
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议注意语法和词汇的准确使用，避免重复，并丰富细节。
範例: Yes, I frequently encounter advertisements on my phone while watching videos on TikTok. Sometimes, these ads are irrelevant and disrupt my viewing experience, which I find quite frustrating.
文法
× I can see a lot of advertisements every day on transports, especially on the subway and buses.
✓ I can see a lot of advertisements every day on transport, especially on the subway and buses.
“transport”在这里作为不可数名词使用，表示交通工具的总称，不需要加复数形式。
× I dislike it, especially when I watching TV shows.
✓ I dislike it, especially when I am watching TV shows.
动词“watch”在这里需要用现在进行时态，主语是“I”，应使用“am watching”。缺少助动词“am”导致语法错误。
× I feel I'm disturbed by some irrelevant things which makes me feel annoyed.
✓ I feel I'm disturbed by some irrelevant things which make me feel annoyed.
关系代词“which”指代复数“things”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“make”，而不是单数“makes”。
× I like those advertisements which are related to my life or something equipped with innovation and creativity, which can teach us, teach me some knowledge.
✓ I like those advertisements which are related to my life or something equipped with innovation and creativity, which can teach me some knowledge.
前后指代不一致，先用“us”后用“me”，应统一为“me”，保持人称一致。
× I feel I'm disturbed by some irrelevant things and it brings brings me bad experience.
✓ I feel I'm disturbed by some irrelevant things and it brings me a bad experience.
“experience”作为不可数名词时前面需要加冠词“a”表示一次具体的经历。
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