广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: حاول تكون اجابتك اكثر وضوح وتركيز. قل جملة رئيسية مباشرة عن الاعلان الذي اثر فيك، ثم اشرح ليش كان مميز. تجنب التكرار والكلمات الزائدة مثل 'uh' و 'actually'.

範例: When I was a child, a chocolate advertisement impressed me because it showed colorful animations and made the chocolate look very delicious.

建議: حاول تستخدم كلمات ربط لتربط افكارك بشكل افضل، وقل رأيك بشكل اوضح. قل جملة رئيسية واضحة ثم اشرحها بتفصيل بسيط.

範例: Yes, I see many advertisements on trains. Some are interesting and catch my attention, but others are annoying because there are too many.

建議: حاول تبني اجابتك بجملة واضحة ثم تدعمها بتفاصيل محددة. قل رأيك بشكل مباشر وتجنب التكرار والكلمات الفارغة.

範例: I don't like advertisements because they often interrupt videos I watch on YouTube, which is very annoying.

建議: اجعل اجابتك اكثر تنظيما باستخدام جملة رئيسية واضحة ثم اشرح السبب باستخدام كلمات ربط. قل لماذا تحب هذا النوع من الاعلانات بالتفصيل.

範例: I like movie advertisements because they help me learn about new films without searching. Therefore, I enjoy watching them during my commute.

建議: حاول ان تكون اجابتك اكثر وضوحا وتركيزا. قل جملة رئيسية واضحة ثم اشرح كيف الاعلانات تؤثر عليك مع امثلة محددة. تجنب التكرار والكلمات الفارغة.

範例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on my phone and computer, especially on YouTube, which interrupt my videos and disturb me when I am reading important articles.

× it was uh, an advertisements campaign

✓ it was uh, an advertisement campaign

The word 'advertisements' is plural, but it is used with the singular article 'an' and the singular noun 'campaign'. The correct form is 'advertisement campaign' (singular) to match the article and noun.

× I saw uh, actually, uh, a chocolate adverts

✓ I saw uh, actually, uh, a chocolate advert

The word 'adverts' is plural, but it is preceded by the singular article 'a'. The correct form is 'a chocolate advert' (singular) to match the article.

× I see a lot of, uh, advertisement when I go to work

✓ I see a lot of, uh, advertisements when I go to work

The phrase 'a lot of' is used with plural countable nouns, so 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'.

× I'm not keen of uh, a lot of advertisements

✓ I'm not keen on uh, a lot of advertisements

The correct preposition after 'keen' is 'on', not 'of'. So it should be 'keen on'.

× I don't like advertise advertisements

✓ I don't like advertisements

The word 'advertise' is a verb and incorrectly used here. The correct noun 'advertisements' alone suffices.

× the advice advertisements come and bothers me

✓ the advertisements come and bother me

The word 'advice' is incorrect here; it should be 'advertisements'. Also, 'bothers' should be 'bother' to agree with plural subject 'advertisements'.

× the advice advertisements come and bothers me

✓ the advertisements come and bother me

The plural subject 'advertisements' requires the plural verb 'bother' instead of 'bothers'.

× it uh, interrupt the video game, the video

✓ it uh, interrupts the video, the video game

The verb should be 'interrupts' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'video game' and 'video' are separate items and should be separated by a comma.

× I like advertisements related to movies

✓ I like advertisements related to movies

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× when I go to work or to go to anywhere else

✓ when I go to work or go anywhere else

The phrase 'to go to anywhere else' is incorrect; it should be 'go anywhere else' without the extra 'to'.

× when I see advertisements about any movie, I enjoy, enjoy watching it

✓ when I see advertisements about any movie, I enjoy watching them

The pronoun 'it' refers to singular, but 'advertisements' is plural, so 'them' is correct.

× When I close my laptop or my phone, a lot of advertisements come and interrupt my, uh, video when I watch it on YouTube

✓ When I open my laptop or my phone, a lot of advertisements come and interrupt my video when I watch it on YouTube

The verb 'close' is incorrect here; advertisements appear when devices are on or open, not closed.

× sometimes when I uh, search about something very important or read an essay in English or in my language, a lot of, uh, Twitter

✓ sometimes when I uh, search for something very important or read an essay in English or in my language, a lot of, uh, Twitter ads appear

The correct preposition after 'search' is 'for', not 'about'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs clarification about 'Twitter'.