广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I were' nên là 'I was', và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I remember a commercial for a toy gun that really impressed me when I was a child. It looked very realistic and exciting, which made me want to play with that toy a lot.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì nói 'I yes I do', hãy nói 'Yes, I do'. Ngoài ra, nên bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn về quảng cáo bạn thấy.

範例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and other public transport. For example, the last time I traveled by metro, I noticed a commercial about a new mobile app.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'uh' và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'It's have' thành 'It has'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn với từ vựng phù hợp.

範例: Yes, I like advertisements because they play an important role in marketing. Nowadays, many ads are visually appealing and have catchy jingles that attract attention.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ví dụ, thay vì 'Wild kind of advertise advertising', hãy nói 'I like advertisements about toys'.

範例: I like advertisements about toys because I have loved playing with toys since I was a child. Such ads always catch my attention and interest me.

建議: Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như 'umm' và sửa câu 'it pretty annoy me' thành 'it annoys me'.

範例: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer. They appear on almost every website I visit, and sometimes they annoy me because there are too many of them.

× Yes, I remember a commercial that really surprised me when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I remember a commercial that really surprised me when I was a child.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the first person singular in past tense; it should be 'was'. This is a past tense issue where the verb form does not agree with the subject.

× And I'm pretty surprised by how realistic and exciting it look.

✓ And I'm pretty surprised by how realistic and exciting it looks.

The verb 'look' should be in the third person singular form 'looks' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving third person singular.

× I saw a lot of advertise commercial on trains and other transport when I travel by them.

✓ I saw a lot of advertising commercials on trains and other transport when I traveled by them.

The verb 'travel' should be in past tense 'traveled' to match the past tense context. Also, 'advertise commercial' is incorrect; 'advertising commercials' is the correct form. This is a past tense issue and a noun form issue.

× The last time I saw it is when I travel by the metro and have a commercial about OK.

✓ The last time I saw it was when I traveled by the metro and saw a commercial about OK.

The verbs 'is', 'travel', and 'have' should be in past tense 'was', 'traveled', and 'saw' to maintain past tense consistency. This is a past tense issue.

× I think a commercial is one of the most important part in marketing and I really like it 'cause, uh, nowadays the advertisement is pretty, uh, beautiful.

✓ I think a commercial is one of the most important parts in marketing and I really like it 'cause, uh, nowadays advertisements are pretty, uh, beautiful.

'Part' should be plural 'parts' because it refers to one of many parts. 'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match the plural subject. This is a singular and plural issue.

× It's have a catchy Jingle.

✓ It has a catchy jingle.

'It's have' is incorrect; the correct form is 'It has'. Also, 'Jingle' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun. This is an article and verb form issue.

× Wild kind of advertise advertising.

✓ Well, kind of advertising.

'Wild' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'Well'. Also, 'advertise advertising' is redundant; 'advertising' alone is correct. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and word choice issue.

× I like that it's about the toy 'cause I was a child, a big child, and I really like to play with toy.

✓ I like that it's about toys 'cause I was a child, a big child, and I really liked to play with toys.

'Toy' should be plural 'toys' when referring generally. Also, 'like' should be past tense 'liked' to match the past context. This is a singular and plural issue and past tense issue.

× I have a passion with toy.

✓ I have a passion for toys.

The correct preposition with 'passion' is 'for', not 'with'. Also, 'toy' should be plural 'toys' when speaking generally. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and singular/plural issue.

× So when I saw a commercial about a toy, I really like it.

✓ So when I saw a commercial about a toy, I really liked it.

The verb 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match the past tense context of 'saw'. This is a past tense issue.

× Yes it is usually I see it everywhere, every website I enter and it pretty annoy me 'cause it umm it's appear with the too much.

✓ Yes, I usually see it everywhere, on every website I enter, and it pretty annoys me because it appears too much.

The sentence has several issues: 'it is usually I see' should be 'I usually see'; 'every website' needs the preposition 'on'; 'it pretty annoy me' should be 'it pretty annoys me' (third person singular); 'it's appear' should be 'it appears'; 'with the too much' is incorrect and should be 'too much'. These are present tense, preposition, and subject-verb agreement issues.