广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'when I was a child' twice. Also, try to add a linking phrase to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a bit more detail about why the advertisement impressed you.

範例: Yes, I remember an advertisement from my childhood that really impressed me. It was for a chocolate brand, and the woman in the ad was eating the chocolate very loudly, which made it memorable and appealing.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to avoid repetition and finish your thoughts clearly. Use linking words to explain why you think it's a good strategy.

範例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and buses. I think this is an effective strategy because it attracts the attention of many passengers during their commute.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more structured and formal. Avoid informal phrases like 'wanna' and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, try to be more specific about which advertisements you find annoying and why.

範例: I like some advertisements, but not all of them. For example, when I am working on my phone or laptop, advertisements can be distracting and annoying because they interrupt my concentration.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use complete sentences. Explain what kind of advertising you like and why, using linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I like advertisements that are relevant to my interests. For instance, if I search for something online, I often see related ads on my phone, which can be helpful.

建議: Your answer is quite confusing and lacks clarity. Avoid repetition and incomplete thoughts. Try to organise your ideas logically and explain your opinion clearly using linking words.

範例: I see a lot of advertisements on my phone since I use it more than my computer. Sometimes, it feels like ads are everywhere in my life, which I find overwhelming and not always positive.

× I think it's a quite good strategy for to attract for attracting people and.

✓ I think it's quite a good strategy to attract people.

The phrase 'for to attract for attracting' is incorrect. The correct form is 'to attract' when expressing purpose. Also, 'a quite good' should be 'quite a good' as 'quite' modifies the adjective 'good'. The sentence is corrected to use proper preposition and article order.

× But advertisements coming from everywhere and it's sometimes very annoying.

✓ But advertisements come from everywhere and are sometimes very annoying.

The original sentence lacks a verb for the subject 'advertisements'. 'Coming' is a present participle and does not function as the main verb here. The corrected sentence uses the simple present tense verb 'come' to agree with the plural subject and adds 'are' to link the adjective 'annoying' properly.

× Sometimes I would like to search specific content and I don't know how to search it, but after that when I'm checking on my phone I can truly say it is coming without my int.

✓ Sometimes I would like to search for specific content and I don't know how to search for it, but after that when I'm checking my phone I can truly say it is coming without my intent.

The verb 'search' requires the preposition 'for' when indicating what is being searched. Also, 'checking on my phone' should be 'checking my phone' as 'check' is transitive. The word 'int' seems to be a typo for 'intent'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I see advertisements a lot when I'm on my phone because I don't use computer a lot, but on my phone it's a lot.

✓ I see advertisements a lot when I'm on my phone because I don't use the computer much, but on my phone there are a lot.

The noun 'computer' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific device type. Also, 'it's a lot' is unclear; 'there are a lot' correctly refers to the plural noun 'advertisements'. The phrase 'don't use computer a lot' is better expressed as 'don't use the computer much'.

× It's it's sometimes imagine of my life.

✓ Sometimes it feels like an image of my life.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Imagine' is a verb, but here a noun 'image' is appropriate. The phrase 'it's it's sometimes imagine of my life' is corrected to a proper sentence structure expressing the intended meaning.