广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在大量重复和犹豫词汇，表达不够流畅且信息不具体。建议减少重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并提供具体细节来丰富答案。

範例: Yes, I remember a medicine advertisement from my childhood that promised quick recovery. It was very memorable because it showed a child feeling better after taking the medicine.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确，如“trends”应为“trains”，句子结构不够自然。建议注意词汇准确性，使用连贯的句子，并提供更具体的理由。

範例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains, buses, and the MRT. I think these ads are effective because passengers have time to notice them during their commute.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且信息不够具体。建议使用更准确的句子结构，避免语法错误，并具体说明喜欢广告的原因。

範例: Actually, I find advertisements interesting because they help me learn about new products and how they work, especially those displayed on public transport.

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少清晰的主题句和支持细节。建议先明确回答问题，再用具体例子支持观点，避免语法错误。

範例: I like advertisements at the beginning of podcasts because I listen to podcasts often, and these ads introduce me to new apps that I might find useful.

建議: 回答中存在重复和未完成的句子，表达不够连贯。建议避免重复，完成句子，并提供具体例子说明广告出现的场景。

範例: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer, especially on social media platforms like Instagram and YouTube. For example, when my friends and I discuss products, ads related to those topics often appear.

× Yes, I can see a lot of advertising on trends or MRT or bus.

✓ Yes, I can see a lot of advertising on trains or MRT or buses.

这里的“trends”和“bus”应使用复数形式“trains”和“buses”，因为表示多种交通工具。单复数错误属于单复数问题。

× And I think that the advertising on these transportation is very useful because when people will see it very easily.

✓ And I think that the advertising on these transportation is very useful because people can see it very easily.

在表示一般事实时，不应使用“will”，而应使用一般现在时或情态动词“can”。这里“will see”用法错误，属于将来时错误。

× Actually I think that advertisement is very interesting and buying the advertisements on the transportation, I can know a lot of new product and how it works.

✓ Actually I think that advertisements are very interesting and by seeing the advertisements on the transportation, I can learn about a lot of new products and how they work.

“advertisement”应为复数“advertisements”，与后文“products”保持一致；“product”应为复数“products”；“buying the advertisements”语义不合，应改为“by seeing the advertisements”。这些均为单复数错误。

× Actually I think that advertisement is very interesting and buying the advertisements on the transportation, I can know a lot of new product and how it works.

✓ Actually I think that advertisements are very interesting and by seeing the advertisements on the transportation, I can learn about a lot of new products and how they work.

“buying the advertisements on the transportation”中的“buying”用法不当，应使用“by seeing”表示通过看到广告获得信息，属于介词使用错误。

× I like the the advertising that is and at the first of the podcast because I listen to the podcast more now, so I often listen to the new app.

✓ I like the advertising that is at the beginning of the podcast because I listen to podcasts more now, so I often listen to new apps.

“the the”重复，应去掉一个；“at the first of the podcast”应改为“at the beginning of the podcast”；“the podcast”改为复数“podcasts”更符合语境；“the new app”改为复数“new apps”。这些属于定冠词使用错误。

× For example, if I and if my my friends and I are discussing.

✓ For example, if my friends and I are discussing something.

句子结构不完整且重复“if”，应简化为“if my friends and I are discussing something”，属于句子结构错误。