广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，缺乏具体细节。建议用完整句子表达观点，并提供具体广告内容和印象。

範例: Yes, there was an advertisement that impressed me as a child. It featured a girl saying "so easy," which was catchy and memorable. Another one showed a boy with a dog named Wang Wang, which I found very cute and interesting.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不清晰。建议使用连贯句子，说明广告的特点和人们的反应。

範例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and buses. Many of them feature famous actors, which attract some people's attention, but others may find them annoying.

建議: 表达不够自然，语法错误较多。建议用更准确的时态和词汇，清楚表达喜欢与否及原因。

範例: I used to like advertisements when I was a child because they were interesting and creative. However, now I find most of them boring and repetitive.

建議: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，说明喜欢的广告类型并给出具体原因。

範例: I like advertisements that have funny characters and catchy music because they are entertaining and easy to remember.

建議: 时态使用错误，表达不流畅。建议用正确时态描述过去和现在的情况，并说明原因。

範例: I used to see many advertisements on my phone and computer when I was a child, but now I rarely see them because I find most ads boring and uninteresting.

× I really like the advertisement. That and it has a girl say so easy.

✓ I really like the advertisement. It has a girl saying 'so easy'.

这里advertisement是可数名词，前面用单数形式正确，但后面句子结构不完整，应该用动名词形式表达女孩说“so easy”。

× And other advertisement A boy has Wang Wang newsy.

✓ And another advertisement has a boy saying 'Wang Wang newsy'.

advertisement前应使用another表示另一个广告，且句子结构需完整，使用动名词表达男孩说话内容。

× Yes, I always see a lot of advertisement on transport.

✓ Yes, I always see a lot of advertisements on transport.

advertisement应使用复数形式advertisements，因为这里指多个广告。

× Some some many times these advertisement is actors.

✓ Many times these advertisements have actors.

advertisement应为复数advertisements，且主谓一致，使用have代替is。

× When I was a child, I really liked the advertisement because when I was a young, many advertisement is very interesting and wonderful, but now it's so boring and just just this.

✓ When I was a child, I really liked the advertisements because when I was young, many advertisements were very interesting and wonderful, but now they're so boring and just like this.

advertisement应为复数advertisements，young前不加冠词，时态应与过去一致，were代替is，they're代替it's。

× Not only me but also many others. We really enjoyed advertisement with funny characters and Cathay music.

✓ Not only me but also many others. We really enjoy advertisements with funny characters and catchy music.

advertisement应为复数advertisements，enjoyed改为现在时enjoy以符合上下文，catchy是正确形容词。

× When I was a child I often see advertisement, but now I hardly see it because nowadays advertisement is very boring and, uh, uninteresting.

✓ When I was a child I often saw advertisements, but now I hardly see them because nowadays advertisements are very boring and uninteresting.

advertisement应为复数advertisements，过去时用saw，代词it改为them以指代复数。

× When I was a child I often see advertisement, but now I hardly see it because nowadays advertisement is very boring and, uh, uninteresting.

✓ When I was a child I often saw advertisements, but now I hardly see them because nowadays advertisements are very boring and uninteresting.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时，see改为saw。

× Some some many times these advertisement is actors. Umm, people will like them, but many people will dislike.

✓ Many times these advertisements have actors. Umm, some people will like them, but many people will dislike.

使用some people更合适，且advertisement应为复数advertisements。

× We really enjoyed advertisement with funny characters and Cathay music.

✓ We really enjoy advertisements with funny characters and catchy music.

Cathay是错误拼写，应为catchy，表示“吸引人的”。