广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be improved by adding more specific details about the advertisement and using linking words to make the response more coherent. Also, try to avoid minor grammatical errors and redundancy.

範例: Yes, there was an advertisement that impressed me as a child. It was for a popular Turkish supermarket called Migos, and it featured a catchy song that I used to sing all the time. Because of its memorable tune and colorful visuals, it really stuck in my mind.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but could be more natural and structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Adding a bit more detail would also enhance your response.

範例: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements, especially in metros where they are everywhere. Additionally, I often notice ads on bus stops, which makes advertising very visible in public transport areas.

建議: Your answer is honest but could be clearer and more concise. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and improve grammar. Use linking words to organize your ideas and provide specific reasons for your opinion.

範例: To be honest, I don't like most advertisements because they are everywhere due to globalization, which I find quite annoying. However, there are a few ads that I enjoy occasionally.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and fluent. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Providing a specific example would strengthen your response.

範例: I like creative advertisements because they often include unique elements that capture my attention. For example, some ads tell interesting stories that keep me engaged without feeling bored.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and filler words. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to organize your ideas. Also, avoid repetition and be more specific.

範例: Yes, I see advertisements almost every time I use my phone or computer. For instance, when I visit websites or watch series on YouTube, ads appear frequently, sometimes every ten minutes.

× I was always singing this song which was playing on the advertisement.

✓ I was always singing this song which was playing in the advertisement.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'advertisement'. The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to content within an advertisement. Use 'playing in the advertisement' to indicate the song was part of the advertisement.

× Yes, I always see, especially in metros, there are everywhere advertisements and I also see some advertisements on bus stops.

✓ Yes, I always see them, especially in metros; advertisements are everywhere, and I also see some advertisements at bus stops.

The sentence has incorrect preposition use and awkward structure. 'There are everywhere advertisements' is incorrect; it should be 'advertisements are everywhere'. Also, 'on bus stops' should be 'at bus stops' because advertisements are located at bus stops, not on them. Adding 'them' after 'I always see' clarifies the object.

× To be honest, not really umm, there are just several advertisements that I can say I like, but in general I don't like to watch advertisements and with the globalization, the advertisements are everywhere nowadays and it's disturbs me somehow.

✓ To be honest, not really. Umm, there are just several advertisements that I can say I like, but in general, I don't like to watch advertisements. With globalization, advertisements are everywhere nowadays, and it disturbs me somehow.

The sentence has pronoun and verb agreement errors. 'It's disturbs me' is incorrect; it should be 'it disturbs me' because 'it' is the subject and 'disturbs' is the verb. Also, 'the globalization' is incorrect; 'globalization' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'the'. Splitting the sentence improves clarity.

× I like to watch advertisements which are creative. Like as you may imagine, some advertisements are really containing different elements and they just drag you into them.

✓ I like to watch advertisements that are creative. As you may imagine, some advertisements really contain different elements and they just draw you into them.

The phrase 'Like as you may imagine' is incorrect; it should be 'As you may imagine'. Also, 'are really containing' is awkward; the simple present 'really contain' is better for general truths. 'Drag you into them' is acceptable but 'draw you into them' is more idiomatic in this context.

× Yes, almost every time. When I am visiting a website, there are always advertisements surrounding webs, websites or when I am watching a series online on YouTube for example, there are exam uh, advertisements in every 10 minutes.

✓ Yes, almost every time. When I visit a website, there are always advertisements surrounding the web pages or websites, or when I am watching a series online on YouTube, for example, there are advertisements every 10 minutes.

The phrase 'surrounding webs, websites' is unclear and incorrect; 'surrounding the web pages or websites' is clearer. 'In every 10 minutes' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'every 10 minutes'. Also, 'When I am visiting' is better as 'When I visit' for habitual actions.