广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇，并且保持句子完整。

範例: I don't remember any advertisement that impressed me as a child because I found them quite worrying, so I usually ignored them or changed the channel.

建議: 回答中有语法和表达不准确的问题，且有口语填充词。建议使用完整句子，减少口语填充词，使用恰当的词汇表达观点。

範例: Yes, there are many advertisements in public spaces like trains. You can see posters or digital screens showing new products or the latest movies, which are updated regularly, so there is always something new to see.

建議: 回答不够流畅，句子不完整且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，表达更清晰。

範例: No, I don't like advertisements because they always interrupt my favorite shows and often repeat the same content, which makes them unoriginal.

建議: 回答简短且语法有误。建议扩展答案，使用正确的时态和复数形式，增加细节使回答更丰富。

範例: I like funny advertisements because they make me laugh and are easy to remember.

建議: 回答中有多处语法错误和表达不清，建议使用完整句子，避免重复，表达更准确。

範例: I often see advertisements on my phone, which really interrupt my concentration, so I usually ignore them.

× I don't remember any advertisement that impressed me when I was a little I I found it's were quite worrying so I usually just ignore them or change or change channel.

✓ I don't remember any advertisements that impressed me when I was little. I found they were quite worrying, so I usually just ignored them or changed the channel.

这里广告(advertisement)应使用复数形式advertisements，因为指的是多个广告。句子中还存在时态错误，应保持过去时态一致。

× I don't remember any advertisement that impressed me when I was a little I I found it's were quite worrying so I usually just ignore them or change or change channel.

✓ I don't remember any advertisements that impressed me when I was little. I found they were quite worrying, so I usually just ignored them or changed the channel.

描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去时态，如found, were, ignored, changed。

× Yes, it's a lot in public space. You can see a poster or a digital skin, uh, show new things or latest movie, umm, as they're changed out, so it always, uh, some new things to look.

✓ Yes, there are a lot in public spaces. You can see posters or digital skins showing new things or the latest movies, as they're changed out, so there are always some new things to look at.

public space应为复数public spaces，poster和digital skin应使用复数posters和digital skins，movie应为movies。

× Yes, it's a lot in public space. You can see a poster or a digital skin, uh, show new things or latest movie, umm, as they're changed out, so it always, uh, some new things to look.

✓ Yes, there are a lot in public spaces. You can see posters or digital skins showing new things or the latest movies, as they're changed out, so there are always some new things to look at.

latest movie前应加定冠词the，表示特指最新的电影。

× Yes, it's a lot in public space. You can see a poster or a digital skin, uh, show new things or latest movie, umm, as they're changed out, so it always, uh, some new things to look.

✓ Yes, there are a lot in public spaces. You can see posters or digital skins showing new things or the latest movies, as they're changed out, so there are always some new things to look at.

look后应加介词at，构成固定短语look at，表示观看。

× No, I don't like advertisement. Uh, it's always interrupt my favorite shows and they often. Repeat the same things. It's very. It's not original at all.

✓ No, I don't like advertisements. They always interrupt my favorite shows and often repeat the same things. It's very unoriginal.

advertisement应使用复数advertisements，表示广告的总称。interrupt主语为复数时动词用interrupt。

× No, I don't like advertisement. Uh, it's always interrupt my favorite shows and they often. Repeat the same things. It's very. It's not original at all.

✓ No, I don't like advertisements. They always interrupt my favorite shows and often repeat the same things. It's very unoriginal.

主语they为复数，动词interrupt和repeat应使用原形。

× No, I don't like advertisement. Uh, it's always interrupt my favorite shows and they often. Repeat the same things. It's very. It's not original at all.

✓ No, I don't like advertisements. They always interrupt my favorite shows and often repeat the same things. It's very unoriginal.

very后应接形容词unoriginal，表示“不原创”。

× I like funny advertisement, they made me laughed and easy to remember.

✓ I like funny advertisements; they make me laugh and are easy to remember.

advertisement应为复数advertisements。

× I like funny advertisement, they made me laughed and easy to remember.

✓ I like funny advertisements; they make me laugh and are easy to remember.

made me laughed时态错误，应为make me laugh，保持一般现在时。

× I like funny advertisement, they made me laughed and easy to remember.

✓ I like funny advertisements; they make me laugh and are easy to remember.

easy to remember前应加系动词are，构成完整句子。

× I often see advertisement on my phone. Actually it's really interrupt my interest. I apply phone. So I usually ignore it.

✓ I often see advertisements on my phone. Actually, they really interrupt my interest. I apply phone. So I usually ignore them.

advertisement应为复数advertisements。interrupt主语复数时动词用interrupt。ignore后指代复数用them。

× Actually it's really interrupt my interest.

✓ Actually, it really interrupts my interest.

主语it为第三人称单数，动词interrupt应加-s，变为interrupts。