广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，建议注意时态一致性和句子结构的完整性，同时避免重复表达。可以尝试使用更地道的表达方式，使回答更流畅。

範例: Yes, I still remember an advertisement that said drinking milk helps people grow taller. It impressed me a lot because I was quite short as a child and really wanted to grow taller, so I drank a lot of milk back then.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够连贯的问题，建议注意句子结构和词序，避免重复和口语化填充词。可以使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on the MRT, trains, and buses. I think these places are ideal for advertising because a large number of people use public transportation daily.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议加强句子结构的准确性和逻辑性，避免语法错误和不完整句子。

範例: Well, it depends. I don't mind advertisements when I take the bus because they are everywhere. However, I dislike ads that pop up frequently on websites because they annoy me.

建議: 回答中存在语法和表达不准确的问题，建议注意词汇搭配和句子连贯性，避免口语填充词，表达更自然。

範例: I like advertisements about fashion and clothes, as well as new restaurants. Since I love food, I enjoy trying different restaurants, so seeing ads for new places makes me happy.

建議: 回答中存在词汇使用错误和语法问题，建议加强词汇准确性和句子完整性，避免模糊和不连贯的表达。

範例: Yes, I often see many ads when I browse social media. It depends on the content; if I find it interesting, I don't mind. But if the ads bother me, I feel annoyed.

× Yes, I still remember the advertisement about drinking milk can help people grow taller, and that's really impressed me because when I was young I was very short and I really want to get taller, so I drink a lot of milk when I was young.

✓ Yes, I still remember the advertisement about drinking milk can help people grow taller, and that really impressed me because when I was young I was very short and I really wanted to get taller, so I drank a lot of milk when I was young.

这里涉及过去时态的使用。'that's really impressed me' 应改为 'that really impressed me'，因为描述的是过去的感受。'I really want' 应改为 'I really wanted'，'so I drink' 应改为 'so I drank'，均需使用过去时态以符合时间背景。

× Yes, of course, I always see a lot of advertisements on MRT and also trains and bus.

✓ Yes, of course, I always see a lot of advertisements on MRT and also trains and buses.

bus 是可数名词，复数形式应为 buses，不能用单数形式 bus 来表示多个公交车。

× I think this is a good place for people to advertise their uh, items because people there are so many people take these transportation.

✓ I think this is a good place for people to advertise their items because there are so many people who take this transportation.

句子结构混乱，'people there are so many people take these transportation' 语序错误且重复，应调整为 'there are so many people who take this transportation'，使句子通顺且语法正确。

× I always see a lot of advertisements on MRT and also trains and bus.

✓ I always see a lot of advertisements on MRT and also trains and buses.

bus 应使用复数形式 buses，表示多辆公交车。

× If I just take on a bus, I never mind, there are so many advertisements in front of me.

✓ If I just take a bus, I don't mind, there are so many advertisements in front of me.

动词 take 后不需要介词 on，正确表达是 take a bus。

× However, if I browse the website that pump out advertisement really annoyed me so I don't like it.

✓ However, if I browse websites that pump out advertisements, it really annoys me so I don't like it.

'website' 应为复数 'websites'，'advertisement' 应为复数 'advertisements'，动词时态应与主语一致，'annoyed' 应为现在时 'annoys'，且句子缺少逗号分隔。

× I like some fashion, clothes, advertisements and also new restaurants because I'm a huge fan of, uh, dish lover, so I like to try a lot of different restaurants.

✓ I like some fashion and clothes advertisements and also new restaurants because I'm a huge fan of dishes, so I like to try a lot of different restaurants.

'dish lover' 用法不当，应改为 'a fan of dishes'，且 'fashion, clothes, advertisements' 之间缺少连词，需调整为 'fashion and clothes advertisements'。

× Yes, I always see a lot of eyes when I just go through my social media.

✓ Yes, I always see a lot of ads when I just go through my social media.

'eyes' 用词错误，应为 'ads'（广告），因为语境是谈论广告。

× If I'm interesting them, I will.

✓ If I'm interested in them, I will.

'interesting' 是形容词，表示令人感兴趣的；这里应使用过去分词 'interested' 表示感兴趣的状态，并且需要介词 'in'。

× However, if that's something bothered me I will feel annoyed.

✓ However, if something bothers me, I will feel annoyed.

时态错误，'bothered' 应为现在时 'bothers'，且 'that's' 不合适，应直接用 'something'。