广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不完整且表达不自然，缺少连贯性和具体细节。建议完整表达观点，使用连词连接句子，并补充广告的具体内容和原因。

範例: Yes, I was deeply impressed by the Na Beijing advertisement when I was a child because of its catchy music and vivid visuals, which made it very popular among people.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，缺少连贯的表达和具体细节。建议完整表达观点，使用连词连接句子，并具体说明广告的作用。

範例: Yes, there are many advertisements on public transport like trains and subways. People can easily see them while commuting, so these ads are effective in reaching a large audience.

建議: 回答较为完整，但表达略显简单，词汇使用不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并丰富细节。

範例: Yes, I like advertisements because they provide useful information about new products and sales, which helps me buy things at lower prices.

建議: 回答不够流畅，句子断裂，缺少连贯性。建议完整表达观点，使用连词，并具体描述喜欢的广告特点。

範例: I like food advertisements because they show delicious dishes in videos, which are very appealing and make me interested in trying the products.

建議: 回答较为完整，但表达重复且用词不够准确。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达，并补充具体细节。

範例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on my phone and computer because brands want to attract more customers and boost their sales.

× I had a really deep impression on the advertisement of Na Beijing.

✓ I had a really deep impression of the advertisement of Na Beijing.

介词搭配错误，应该用 'impression of' 而不是 'impression on'。这里不是单复数问题，但符合题目要求的最接近类型。

× there are so many advertising on transport such as underground and trains.

✓ there is so much advertising on transport such as underground and trains.

advertising 是不可数名词，不能用复数形式 'advertising'，应使用不可数形式 'advertising' 并搭配 'much'。

× there are so many ad advertisements on the phone and computers.

✓ there are so many advertisements on the phone and computers.

重复使用了 'ad' 和 'advertisements'，应去掉 'ad'，且 'advertisements' 复数形式正确。

× I like the advertisements of. Food because I can see some delicious food in the videos and they are very attractive.

✓ I like the advertisements of food because I can see some delicious food in the videos and they are very attractive.

句中 'Food' 不应大写，且句子中断号应去除。

× It is popular among the people because of its music and. It's.

✓ It is popular among the people because of its music.

句子不完整，断句错误，应删除多余部分使句子完整。

× When people are commuting, they always. Can find something in the transport, so it's good for.

✓ When people are commuting, they can always find something in the transport, so it's good for them.

句子断裂，语序错误，应合并句子并补充缺失部分使句子完整通顺。

× I can get some information of new products and some on sales information so that I can get some cheaper things.

✓ I can get some information about new products and some sales information so that I can get some cheaper things.

介词使用错误，'information' 应搭配 'about' 而非 'of'。

× Maybe the brands want people to see more advertisements to improve their sales.

✓ Maybe the brands want people to see more advertisements to improve their sales.

此句无明显语法错误，符合题目要求不做修改。