广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达清晰，但可以更自然和简洁。避免重复表达“made an impression”和“attracted me most”，并且可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I remember an advertisement for a candy that could be shaped into a rainbow. It was fascinating and beautiful, which made me want to buy it all the time.

建議: 回答中表达了观点，但句子结构较简单，且缺少连接词。可以用更具体的细节和连接词来增强表达的连贯性。

範例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on the subway, especially when the train passes through tunnels. Although they look cool, I usually can't catch the details of what they show.

建議: 回答内容较好，但可以用更丰富的词汇和连接词来使表达更自然流畅。避免重复使用“some”。

範例: I like advertisements that introduce innovative and useful products; however, misleading ads make it difficult for customers to trust them.

建議: 回答表达了观点，但句子稍显重复和不够自然。可以用更地道的表达和连接词来增强逻辑性。

範例: I prefer honest and innovative advertisements because they clearly explain the product's benefits. For example, trustworthy ads focus on how the product works rather than just trying to make money.

× The candy can be made into a rainbow and it was really fascinating and beautiful.

✓ The candy can be made into a rainbow and it was really fascinating and beautiful.

No correction needed here as 'candy' is treated as singular and consistent with the verb forms.

× The candy attracted me most and I wanted to buy them all the time.

✓ The candy attracted me most and I wanted to buy it all the time.

The word 'candy' is singular and uncountable here, so the pronoun should be 'it' instead of 'them' to maintain singular agreement.

× I often see a lot of advertisements on the subway when the train is going through the tunnels.

✓ I often see a lot of advertisements on the subway when the train goes through the tunnels.

The phrase 'is going through' is present continuous, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so simple present tense 'goes through' is more appropriate.

× There are many advertisements passing by and it seems very cool.

✓ There are many advertisements passing by and they seem very cool.

The subject 'advertisements' is plural, so the verb should be 'seem' instead of 'seems' to agree in number.

× However, I never see exactly what it shows.

✓ However, I never see exactly what they show.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'advertisements' which is plural, so it should be 'they' and the verb 'show' to match plural subject.

× However, some advertisements involve some misleading information, making the customers hard to trust them.

✓ However, some advertisements involve some misleading information, making customers find it hard to trust them.

The phrase 'making the customers hard to trust them' is awkward. It is better to say 'making customers find it hard to trust them' to clarify the meaning and correct pronoun use.

× For example, trustworthy ads can make me understand how the product works instead of making some money.

✓ For example, trustworthy ads can help me understand how the product works instead of just making money.

The phrase 'make me understand' is less natural than 'help me understand'. Also, 'making some money' is vague; 'just making money' is clearer and more idiomatic.