广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, one advertisement that impressed me as a child was a public service announcement about safety. It was memorable because it taught me important knowledge about how to stay safe in daily life, which I still remember today.

建議: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise vocabulary. Start with a direct response, then use linking words to add specific examples. Avoid grammatical mistakes and ensure your sentences are coherent and logical.

範例: Yes, in Hong Kong, there are many advertisements on buses and other public transport. For example, large posters often promote new companies opening or upcoming concerts by famous stars, which attract many people's attention.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and vocabulary errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with a topic sentence, then support it with specific examples using appropriate linking words. Use relevant vocabulary related to advertising.

範例: Yes, I like advertisements because they help me learn about new products and their features. For instance, I often see food advertisements on Instagram reels, which show me interesting dishes to try.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and correct grammar. Provide a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then add specific reasons and examples using linking words. Use appropriate vocabulary to describe advertisements and your interests.

範例: I like food advertisements because I enjoy eating. They help me discover special dishes and understand what makes a restaurant unique, which influences where I choose to eat.

× Yes, there are many proper advert isman which is highly recommend it highly have a good member memory for me, because it's there are so meaningful to let me to teach us to teach me the knowledge, the common knowledge.

✓ Yes, there are many proper advertisements which I highly recommend and have good memories of, because they are so meaningful and taught me common knowledge.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'advert isman' instead of the plural 'advertisements' (singular and plural issue). Also, 'it highly have a good member memory' is grammatically incorrect and unclear; it should be rephrased to express having good memories. The phrase 'it's there are so meaningful' is incorrect; 'they are so meaningful' is correct to match the plural subject. The sentence also misuses 'to let me to teach us to teach me' which is confusing and should be simplified to 'taught me'.

× Yes, becauses Hong Kong like the bus outdoor transport also have many poster a big poster on the bus.

✓ Yes, because in Hong Kong, outdoor transport like buses also have many posters, big posters on the buses.

The sentence misuses prepositions and articles. 'Becauses' should be 'because'. 'Hong Kong like the bus outdoor transport' is incorrect; it should be 'in Hong Kong, outdoor transport like buses'. 'Have many poster a big poster' is incorrect; it should be 'have many posters, big posters'. Prepositions and articles need correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× And then there are the advantage mostly is about like some new company is will open or are back star concert.

✓ And then the advertisements are mostly about new companies opening or star concerts coming back.

The sentence incorrectly mixes verb tenses and forms: 'is will open' and 'are back star concert' are incorrect. The correct form is 'new companies opening' (present participle) and 'star concerts coming back'. This corrects the verb tense and form to match the intended meaning.

× Actually I like the effort at Test Monday 'cause you can make me to know that oil is something new or what is the attractive pounds of that thing.

✓ Actually, I like the advertisements on Test Monday because they help me know that something is new or what the attractive points of that thing are.

The phrase 'effort at Test Monday' is unclear and likely a mishearing or mistranslation; 'advertisements on Test Monday' is more appropriate. 'Make me to know' is incorrect; it should be 'help me know'. 'Oil is something new' is likely a mishearing; 'something is new' fits better. 'Attractive pounds' is incorrect; it should be 'attractive points'. Prepositions and word choices are corrected for clarity.

× For example, some affair attachment in the IG reels about the food test.

✓ For example, some advertisements attached in the IG reels about food tasting.

'Affair attachment' is incorrect; it should be 'advertisements attached'. 'Food test' is better expressed as 'food tasting'. Prepositions and word choices are corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I liked some food advertise be 'cause I like eating, so the advertise can make mean to know that was special an voice the difference about this restaurant Ann what is.

✓ I like some food advertisements because I like eating, so the advertisements can help me know what is special and voice the difference about this restaurant and what it offers.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'liked' when present tense 'like' is appropriate to match the ongoing preference. 'Advertise' should be 'advertisements' (plural noun). 'Make mean to know' is incorrect; it should be 'help me know'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× The dash which is recommended.

✓ The dish which is recommended.

'Dash' is a mispronunciation or typo; the correct word is 'dish'. This corrects the noun to match the intended meaning.