电脑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“would like to”多次出现，显得不自然。可以直接陈述使用电脑的场景，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I use a computer mainly for attending meetings, where I take notes on my tablet. Additionally, I often use it for learning by watching online courses and reading eBooks.

建議: 回答应更直接回应问题，避免含糊。可以先给出大致时间，再描述感受，并用连接词使内容连贯。

範例: I first used a computer at home when I was about ten years old. I was amazed by its big screen because it made it easier for my family to use.

建議: 语法错误较多，表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和语法，补充具体细节，使回答更丰富。

範例: Without a computer, we wouldn't be able to get information instantly and would have to rely on newspapers for news. Moreover, people might spend more time on outdoor activities instead of staying indoors.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议使用完整句子，注意冠词和词汇搭配，使用连接词使句子流畅。

範例: It would be difficult to use a computer if I forget to charge it at home, which makes me anxious about running out of power. Also, in places without Wi-Fi or Internet, such as on a plane or while hiking in the mountains, I can't solve some problems using the computer.

× I can watch some online courses and use ebook.

✓ I can watch some online courses and use an ebook.

这里缺少冠词“an”，因为“ebook”是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词。

× I think we will can't get information instantly, but we have to get news in the newspapers.

✓ I think we can't get information instantly, but we have to get news in the newspapers.

情态动词“can't”不能和“will”连用，应该直接用“can't”表示否定能力。

× If I forget the computer's charge in home, I will feel very anxiety about its electricity.

✓ If I forget the computer's charger at home, I will feel very anxious about its electricity.

“charge”应为“charger”（充电器），“in home”应为“at home”，形容词“anxiety”应改为形容词形式“anxious”。

× If I forget the computer's charge in home, I will feel very anxiety about its electricity.

✓ If I forget the computer's charger at home, I will feel very anxious about its electricity.

介词“in”用于表示“在……里面”，这里应使用“at”表示“在家”。

× if someplace without Wi-Fi or Internet, we can't deal with some problems on computer, for example on the plane or go for hiking in mountains.

✓ If there is someplace without Wi-Fi or Internet, we can't deal with some problems on the computer, for example on the plane or when going hiking in the mountains.

缺少主语“there is”，名词前缺少冠词“the”，动词短语“go for hiking”应改为“when going hiking”。