电脑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น ควรตอบตรงประเด็นและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่เข้าใจหรือไม่เกี่ยวข้อง เช่น "he shared a lip hard" และควรอธิบายเพิ่มเติมเกี่ยวกับการใช้คอมพิวเตอร์ในสถานการณ์ต่าง ๆ อย่างชัดเจน

範例: I usually use a computer when I need to complete school projects or send emails. For example, in my school, we have a subject that requires us to do projects, so I use the computer to research and submit my work on time.

建議: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจนมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้ tense ที่เหมาะสม และคำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น "play" แทน "pray" รวมถึงการเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหลและมีความหมายครบถ้วน

範例: I remember the first time I used a computer was when I was in primary school. I played games on the computer with my cousin, and that was my first experience using one.

建議: ควรตอบคำถามโดยตรงและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น "tablet for study" แทน "tablet tour study" และอธิบายเพิ่มเติมว่าการไม่มีคอมพิวเตอร์จะส่งผลอย่างไรต่อชีวิตของคุณ

範例: If I didn't have a computer, my life would be more difficult because I use it for studying and typing reports. However, I also use a tablet to do presentations and complete my schoolwork.

建議: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้อง เช่น "programs I have never used before" และเชื่อมประโยคให้สมบูรณ์ นอกจากนี้ควรอธิบายเพิ่มเติมเกี่ยวกับความยากลำบากในการใช้โปรแกรมใหม่ ๆ อย่างชัดเจน

範例: It would be difficult for me to use a computer when I have to work with programs I have never used before. Usually, I use the same applications that I am familiar with, so new software can confuse me and make it hard to complete my tasks.

× When I have to send that, he shared a lip hard.

✓ When I have to send that, he shared a lip hard.

This sentence is unclear and does not follow proper sentence structure, making it difficult to understand. It may contain errors beyond grammar, such as word choice or phrasing, but no specific grammar problem from the list applies here.

× In my school we have one subject how is we have to do a project.

✓ In my school, we have one subject where we have to do a project.

The pronoun 'how' is incorrectly used; it should be 'where' to indicate the subject in which the project is done.

× So I have to use computer to send our T-shirt early part of project.

✓ So I have to use a computer to send our T-shirt in the early part of the project.

The noun 'computer' is countable and requires an article 'a'. Also, 'early part of project' needs the definite article 'the' and preposition 'in' for correct usage.

× I've been doing.

✓ I've been doing it.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object; adding 'it' completes the present perfect continuous tense structure.

× I memorized that first time that I use their computer is.

✓ I remember the first time that I used their computer.

The verb 'memorized' is incorrectly used; 'remember' fits better. Also, 'use' should be in past tense 'used' to match the past event.

× When I was in primary school, I pray the game in the computer with my cousin.

✓ When I was in primary school, I played games on the computer with my cousin.

The verb 'pray' is incorrect; it should be 'played' in past tense. Also, 'the game' should be plural 'games' and 'in the computer' should be 'on the computer'.

× And that is the first time that I using computer.

✓ And that was the first time that I used a computer.

The verb 'using' is incorrectly used; it should be past tense 'used' to match the past event. Also, 'is' should be 'was' for past time reference.

× Are you say that nothing shame because in my real life I ain't done use much. Computer.

✓ Are you saying that there is nothing wrong because in my real life I haven't used a computer much?

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Are you say' should be 'Are you saying'; 'nothing shame' should be 'nothing wrong'; 'ain't done use' should be 'haven't used'; and 'much. Computer' should be 'a computer much'.

× Instead I use tablet tour study to type a report or to do a presentation in there.

✓ Instead, I use a tablet to study, to type a report, or to do a presentation there.

'Tablet tour study' is incorrect; it should be 'tablet to study'. Also, 'in there' is better as 'there'. Articles are needed before 'tablet'.

× I think when I have to use the program that I never. No one before.

✓ I think when I have to use a program that I have never used before.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks past participle 'used' after 'have never'. Also, 'No one before' is incorrect and should be removed or integrated properly.

× Mostly off my light, I always used the same application that I have learned about it.

✓ Mostly in my life, I always use the same application that I have learned about.

'Off my light' is incorrect; it should be 'in my life'. Also, 'used' should be 'use' to match present tense, and 'about it' is redundant after 'learned'.

× So if. It might be something new about the computer.

✓ So if there is something new about the computer,

The sentence is fragmented and incomplete. It should be combined properly with a conditional clause starting with 'if there is'.

× I will be confused and don't know what to do.

✓ I will be confused and won't know what to do.

The verb 'don't know' should be 'won't know' to match the future tense 'will be confused'.