艺术— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer has some pronunciation and grammar issues, and some redundancy. Try to speak more clearly and directly. For example, say "Yes, I like drawing because I appreciate art. When I was younger, I often drew pictures of mountains and rivers, but I haven't continued recently."

範例: Yes, I like drawing because I appreciate art. When I was younger, I often drew pictures of mountains and rivers, but I haven't continued recently.

建議: There are pronunciation errors and unclear words like "calorie" and "college" which should be "gallery." Also, use correct tenses and avoid redundancy. For example, "I used to go to galleries often to appreciate the details in paintings, but now I don't go as much because of my busy work schedule."

範例: I used to go to galleries often to appreciate the details in paintings, but now I don't go as much because of my busy work schedule.

建議: Your answer is unclear due to mispronunciations and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and simply. For example, "Yes, I want to learn more about art because I am interested in paintings and music. Although I don't have an art background, I try to learn whenever I have free time."

範例: Yes, I want to learn more about art because I am interested in paintings and music. Although I don't have an art background, I try to learn whenever I have free time.

建議: Your answer has grammar and vocabulary errors. Use past tense correctly and be more specific. For example, "Yes, when I was a kid, I often drew horses, cats, and mountains using bright and colorful paints. I remember drawing horses in my notebook."

範例: Yes, when I was a kid, I often drew horses, cats, and mountains using bright and colorful paints. I remember drawing horses in my notebook.

× I like drawings.

✓ I like drawing.

'Drawing' as a hobby or activity is usually uncountable, so the singular form 'drawing' is appropriate here rather than the plural 'drawings'.

× I'm person who appreciate arts.

✓ I'm a person who appreciates art.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'person'. Also, 'appreciate' should be 'appreciates' to agree with the singular subject 'who'. 'Arts' is better as 'art' when referring to the general field.

× When I was signed I used to draw a lot of pictures related to a mountain and river, but I didn't continue doing it even though I appreciate lots of drawings.

✓ When I was a child, I used to draw a lot of pictures related to mountains and rivers, but I didn't continue doing it even though I appreciate lots of drawings.

'Was signed' is incorrect; likely intended 'was a child'. Also, 'a mountain and river' should be plural 'mountains and rivers' to generalize. The phrase 'even though I appreciate lots of drawings' is acceptable as present tense because appreciation continues.

× When I was signed, I often go to calorie and appreciate lots of small details, uh, within the painting or drawing over there.

✓ When I was a child, I often went to galleries and appreciated lots of small details within the paintings or drawings there.

'Was signed' should be 'was a child'. 'Go' should be past tense 'went' to match 'when I was'. 'Calorie' is a mishearing or typo for 'gallery'. 'Painting or drawing' should be plural 'paintings or drawings' to match 'lots of small details'. 'Over there' is better as 'there'.

× But now since I have different, uh, work schedule and lots of pressure from my work, so I didn't go to the college that often.

✓ But now, since I have a different work schedule and lots of pressure from my work, I don't go to the gallery that often.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'Didn't go' is past tense but 'now' indicates present. It should be present tense 'don't go'. 'College' is incorrect; should be 'gallery'. Also, 'a different work schedule' needs the article 'a'.

× I want to learn more about DRS even though I am quite fond of, uh, going D on detail about the hours, so resources, painting and music.

✓ I want to learn more about arts even though I am quite fond of going into detail about the hours, resources, painting, and music.

'DRS' and 'going D on detail' seem to be misheard or typos. Corrected to 'arts' and 'going into detail'. The phrase 'about the hours, so resources' is unclear; assumed 'hours, resources' as items to detail. Commas added for clarity.

× I'm not from that background, so I've always preferred to go learn more about that whenever I got three time I sometimes.

✓ I'm not from that background, so I've always preferred to learn more about it whenever I get free time sometimes.

'Go learn' is awkward; 'learn' alone is better. 'Got three time' is incorrect; likely 'get free time'. 'That' changed to 'it' to refer back to 'that background' or 'arts'. Sentence restructured for clarity.

× Yeah, I often do a lot of things such as, uh, horses, cats and mountains.

✓ Yeah, I often did a lot of things such as drawing horses, cats, and mountains.

'Often do' is present tense but context is past. Should be 'often did'. Also, 'do a lot of things such as horses' is incomplete; specify 'drawing horses'.

× When I was kids, I used to paint it with different shiny and colorful painting colors.

✓ When I was a kid, I used to paint with different shiny and colorful paints.

'When I was kids' is incorrect; should be 'a kid' (singular). 'Paint it' is unclear; better to say 'paint'. 'Painting colors' is redundant; 'paints' suffices.

× I remember I used to draw horse on the book, so.

✓ I remember I used to draw horses in the book.

'Horse' should be plural 'horses' to generalize. 'On the book' is better as 'in the book'.