艺术— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ không tự nhiên và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như 'get from mirror'. Bạn nên sử dụng các cụm từ tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'actually' và 'moreover'. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I enjoy drawing because it helps me relax and express my creativity. I often draw with my friends and family, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các cụm từ như 'actually' và 'moreover' một cách không tự nhiên. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp để kết nối ý. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến cách diễn đạt để tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'to bond with' mà thiếu đối tượng cụ thể.

範例: Yes, I enjoy visiting galleries because they enrich my understanding of art. Additionally, I often go with my family, which helps us spend quality time together.

建議: Câu trả lời có một số lỗi về cách dùng từ và cấu trúc câu, ví dụ như 'improve my brain to have more intelligence' không tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng các cụm từ đơn giản, tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn để diễn đạt ý muốn học hỏi thêm về nghệ thuật.

範例: Yes, I definitely want to learn more about art because it helps me relax and enhances my creativity and knowledge.

建議: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'to how to draw' và sử dụng từ không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ hợp lý để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I learned drawing as a child. My father taught me how to use many colors, and my friends and I often visited galleries together.

× Yes, actually I enjoy drawing because it helps me to let my hair down and get from mirror and moreover I usually draw with my friends and family.

✓ Yes, actually I enjoy drawing because it helps me to let my hair down and get away from the mirror and moreover I usually draw with my friends and family.

The phrase 'get from mirror' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'get away from the mirror' which means to stop focusing on oneself. The verb 'get' should be followed by the preposition 'away from' to convey this meaning.

× Yes, actually I enjoy drawing because it helps me to let my hair down and get from mirror and moreover I usually draw with my friends and family.

✓ Yes, actually I enjoy drawing because it helps me to let my hair down and get away from the mirror and moreover I usually draw with my friends and family.

The preposition 'from' is incorrectly used after 'get'. The correct preposition is 'away from' to indicate moving away or distancing oneself from something.

× Yes, actually I would like to go to the gallery because it can do wonders for enriching my knowledge about artwork and moreover, I frequently go to the gallery with my family to bond with.

✓ Yes, actually I would like to go to the gallery because it can do wonders for enriching my knowledge about artwork and moreover, I frequently go to the gallery with my family to bond.

The phrase 'to bond with' is incomplete and incorrect here. 'Bond' is an intransitive verb and does not require a preposition when used to mean 'to develop a close relationship'. Therefore, 'to bond' is correct without 'with'.

× Yes, actually when I was a child I learned drawing and my father taught me to how to draw with many colors and moreover my friends and I usually go to the gallery.

✓ Yes, actually when I was a child I learned drawing and my father taught me how to draw with many colors and moreover my friends and I usually go to the gallery.

The phrase 'taught me to how to draw' is incorrect. The correct form is 'taught me how to draw'. The infinitive 'to' should be removed before 'how' because 'teach someone how to do something' is the correct structure.