艺术— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然，语法和表达存在错误，且内容重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，表达清晰。

範例: No, I don't like drawing because I don't have much talent in art. When I was a child, I often felt frustrated because my drawings were not as good as other children's.

建議: 回答中表达不够连贯，词汇使用不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I enjoy going to galleries because I have a good sense of aesthetics. Also, I like fashion and matching clothes, so I appreciate the artistic styles displayed there.

建議: 回答表达不完整且有语法错误，建议使用完整句子并清晰表达观点。

範例: No, I don't want to learn more about art because it is very complex and has a rich history. Instead, I prefer to improve my sense of aesthetics and fashion.

建議: 回答中有严重语法和表达错误，内容不清晰。建议简化句子，直接回答问题并说明感受。

範例: Yes, I took many art lessons as a child, but I often felt frustrated because my drawings were not as good as other children's.

× I I had drawing because I don't have any talent in art.

✓ I don't like drawing because I don't have any talent in art.

这里应该使用一般现在时态来表达现在的喜好，'had drawing' 是过去时态且用法错误，应改为 'don't like drawing'。

× So when I was a child I always I'm always felt frustrated because my drawing is ugly compared with other children's.

✓ So when I was a child, I always felt frustrated because my drawings were ugly compared with other children's.

这里描述过去的感受，应该用过去时态 'felt'，且 'I'm always felt' 结构错误，应去掉 'I'm always'。另外，'drawing' 应用复数形式 'drawings'，因为是泛指多幅画。

× my drawing is ugly compared with other children's.

✓ my drawings are ugly compared with other children's.

这里 'drawing' 应该用复数形式 'drawings'，因为是泛指多幅画。动词也要与复数主语一致，改为 'are'。

× So after that I. Dislike George jewelry and.

✓ So after that, I disliked drawing and jewelry.

句子结构混乱，'Dislike George jewelry and' 无意义，应改为 'disliked drawing and jewelry'，并使用过去时态表达过去的感受。

× Oh I believe I have a sense of aesthetics and because I'm I'm always good at outfit and matching my closes so I prefer to go to the gallery and enjoy some.

✓ Oh, I believe I have a sense of aesthetics because I'm always good at outfits and matching my clothes, so I prefer to go to the gallery and enjoy some.

'I'm I'm' 是重复错误，应去掉一个 'I'm'。'outfit' 应用复数 'outfits'，'closes' 拼写错误，应为 'clothes'。

× I prefer to go to the gallery and enjoy some. A statics from this artist.

✓ I prefer to go to the gallery and enjoy some aesthetics from this artist.

'A statics' 拼写错误，应为 'aesthetics'，且不需要句号分开。

× No, I think the art is very difficult and have a rich history and so many documents you need to learn.

✓ No, I think art is very difficult and has a rich history and so many documents you need to learn.

'the art' 应去掉定冠词 'the'，'have' 应改为第三人称单数 'has'，因为主语是单数 'art'。

× No, I think the art is very difficult and have a rich history and so many documents you need to learn.

✓ No, I think art is very difficult and has a rich history and so many documents you need to learn.

'art' 作为不可数名词时通常不加定冠词 'the'。

× So I prefer to. Just improve my aesthetics and. Improve my owl outfit sense.

✓ So I prefer to just improve my aesthetics and improve my own outfit sense.

'owl' 拼写错误，应为 'own'。句子中断应连贯。

× Yes, when I was a kid, we have men in their sense of we had many lessons about the fine art, but I found myself is always always.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, we had many lessons about fine art, but I always found myself.

'we have men in their sense of' 是无意义的，应删除。'have' 应改为过去时 'had'。'found myself is always always' 结构错误，应改为 'I always found myself'。

× Frustrated with the distance because I usually did of Massdrop compared to other children.

✓ frustrated with the distance because I usually did worse compared to other children.

'did of Massdrop' 是错误表达，推测想表达 'did worse'，即表现较差。

× my drawing is ugly compared with other children's.

✓ my drawings are ugly compared with other children's.

同上，'drawing' 应用复数 'drawings'，动词也要与复数主语一致。