电子邮件— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your response more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and correct articles and plural forms. Use one or two specific examples of when you send work emails and add a linking word to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I do. I usually send emails for work because they’re a convenient and quick way to share information. For example, I often email my manager reports and meeting notes after each shift, so everyone stays updated.

建議: Be concise and correct grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating typical occasions, then give a specific example with linking words (e.g., "for example", "such as"). Fix pronouns, articles and verb forms.

範例: I usually send emails when I apply for jobs or arrange interviews. For example, before an interview I email my CV and a cover letter to the recruiter because I don’t have their phone number.

建議: Avoid saying you have no idea; instead give a qualified opinion. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., "flexibility" not "flexi"; "transmitting" not "translating"). Provide a reason and an example and keep it fluent and natural.

範例: I’m not an expert, but I believe email is still popular in China because it’s convenient and flexible. For instance, many companies use email for formal communication and sending documents.

建議: State your opinion clearly and support it with a reason and a brief example. Use correct noun forms and comparative structures. Include a linking word (e.g., "because", "however") to connect cause and effect.

範例: I think email will become less popular in the future because instant messaging apps like WhatsApp and WeChat are faster and more convenient for casual communication. However, email will still be used for formal messages and documents.

× I usually send a e-mail specially related to work because it is a convenient and faster way of sharing a information to 1 to another person, so I usually use it.

✓ I usually send an e-mail, especially related to work, because it is a convenient and faster way of sharing information with another person, so I usually use it.

Errors: incorrect article 'a e-mail' should be 'an e-mail' (Article errors, ID 22) and 'a information' should be 'information' with no article (Article errors, ID 22). Also 'specially' is awkward; 'especially' is correct. 'sharing a information to 1 to another person' is wrong preposition/phrase: use 'sharing information with another person' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). Suggestions: use 'an' before vowel sounds, omit unnecessary articles before uncountable nouns like 'information', use 'especially' for emphasis, and use 'share X with Y'.

× Well, I usually send a e-mail to other person especially when I need for any kind of a job interview.

✓ Well, I usually send an e-mail to another person, especially when I need it for any kind of job interview.

Errors: 'other person' should be 'another person' (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). Missing object 'it' after 'need' and unnecessary article 'a' before 'job interview'. Suggestions: use 'another' for nonspecific single persons, include the object pronoun 'it' when needed, and say 'job interview' without 'a' when used with 'any kind of'.

× Before the interview send my CV through our e-mail because I have no personal contact number of.

✓ Before the interview, I send my CV through our e-mail because I do not have a personal contact number.

Errors: sentence missing subject and auxiliary; 'Before the interview send my CV' lacks subject 'I' (Sentence without a verb/structure, IDs 23 and 26). 'have no personal contact number of' has incorrect word order and preposition (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). Suggestions: always include the subject and correct verb form; say 'I send my CV' and 'I do not have a personal contact number' or 'I have no personal contact number.'

× Well, I have no idea about China, but I think it would be popular in China because of convenience and flexi flexibility.

✓ Well, I have no idea about China, but I think e-mail would be popular there because of convenience and flexibility.

Errors: repetition 'flexi flexibility' is incorrect and redundant (Sentence structure/errors, ID 26). 'popular in China' repeated; better to use 'there' for variety (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). Suggestions: remove duplicated fragments, use 'flexibility' and refer back with 'there' to avoid repetition.

× So I think e-mail is a quite efficient way of translating information.

✓ So I think e-mail is quite an efficient way of transmitting information.

Errors: 'a quite efficient' wrong article placement; should be 'quite an efficient' (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, ID 13) and verb 'translating' is wrong meaning for sending info—use 'transmitting' or 'sharing'. Suggestions: place 'quite' before the article+adjective correctly as 'quite an efficient' and choose the correct verb 'transmit' or 'share'.

× Well, I personally think that it will be less popular in upcoming year because the invention of new messages app like WhatsApp and other social platform which make information more faster as compared to e-mail.

✓ Well, I personally think that it will be less popular in the upcoming years because the invention of new messaging apps like WhatsApp and other social platforms makes information faster compared to e-mail.

Errors: 'upcoming year' should be 'the upcoming year' or 'upcoming years' (Article errors, ID 22). 'messages app' should be 'messaging apps' (Incorrect use of adjectives or nouns, ID 13). Subject-verb agreement: 'which make' should be 'which makes' because the subject is 'the invention' or better rewrite to 'apps ... make' with plural subject (Subject-verb agreement, ID 27). 'more faster' is redundant; use 'faster' (Comparative error, ID 25). Suggestions: use correct pluralization, ensure subject and verb agree, avoid redundant comparatives, and use 'messaging apps' and 'social platforms'.