团队合作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like “I usually see for.” Also keep to under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I do. I find teamwork valuable because it combines different ideas and usually leads to better results. For example, in group projects we could divide tasks according to each person’s strengths, which improved both quality and efficiency.

建議: Use correct tense and clearer structure. Begin with a direct answer, then explain with a specific example and a linking word. Reduce hesitation and grammatical mistakes (e.g., “I usually do” vs “I often worked” or “I worked”).

範例: Yes, I often worked in teams when I was in high school. However, it was difficult at times because we lacked clear communication; for instance, we often duplicated tasks because no one coordinated the schedule.

建議: Provide a fuller sentence with linking words and a specific example that shows those skills. Combine the short fragments into a coherent statement and give concrete evidence of what you learned.

範例: Working in a team taught me many things, especially communication and social skills. For example, I learned to listen actively and give constructive feedback, which helped me resolve conflicts and keep projects on track.

建議: Be specific and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, use linking words to expand, and finish the thought instead of trailing off. Give a concrete example of a downside and, if possible, a brief suggestion to reduce it.

範例: One downside of teamwork is conflict: disagreements about roles or standards can lead to tension. For example, in one project differing expectations caused arguments until we set clear responsibilities and deadlines to solve the issue.

× Yes, I always appreciate the good teamwork.

✓ Yes, I always appreciate good teamwork.

Use of the definite article 'the' before 'good teamwork' is unnecessary and unnatural in this general statement. 'Teamwork' here is an uncountable noun referring to the general concept, so omit the article: 'appreciate good teamwork.'

× So I usually see for.

✓ So I usually look for it.

The original 'see for' is incorrect collocation. The intended meaning is likely 'look for' (phrasal verb) and needs an object 'it' referring to teamwork. Use the base verb 'look' + particle 'for' with object: 'look for it.'

× I usually do a team work when I was in high school, uh, but I found that it was very difficult because we were not good at communication.

✓ I usually did teamwork when I was in high school, but I found it very difficult because we were not good at communicating.

Multiple issues: tense consistency requires past tense 'did' not 'do' because 'when I was in high school' is past. 'Teamwork' is uncountable so not 'a team work.' Use 'found it' instead of 'found that it was' for conciseness. 'Communication' as a noun is acceptable but 'communicating' (gerund) better matches 'not good at ...' collocation: 'not good at communicating.'

× I think teamwork teaches me a lot, especially. Communication and social skills.

✓ I think teamwork taught me a lot, especially communication and social skills.

Tense should be past 'taught' if referring to past experiences; if speaker means general truth, 'teaches' is okay but sentence must be one complete clause. The period after 'especially' incorrectly fragments the sentence. Combine into a single sentence and include the objects 'communication and social skills.'

× I think the downsides of key work are fighting and making some friends hate each other because whenever people have to work together, there are always.

✓ I think the downsides of teamwork are fighting and people becoming hostile to each other, because whenever people have to work together there are always conflicts.

Multiple errors: 'key work' is likely a mistaken phrase for 'teamwork.' 'The downsides of teamwork' is fine without extra article issues but original used 'key work.' 'Making some friends hate each other' is awkward; use 'people becoming hostile to each other' or 'friends hating each other.' Sentence ending 'there are always' is incomplete—complete it with 'conflicts.' Also remove the unnecessary comma before 'there are always.'