团队合作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, correct grammatical errors, and avoid unnecessary phrases like naming the examiner. Use one or two specific reasons and a linking word to connect them. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

範例: I usually prefer working alone because I find I concentrate better and finish tasks faster. However, I understand teamwork is often necessary, especially for large projects where different skills are needed.

建議: Make the response more structured and concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific example of a successful team experience and briefly explain your role. Use linking words such as 'for example' or 'as a result'.

範例: Yes, I have worked in teams several times and usually took the role of team leader. For example, I led a university project where I divided tasks according to each member’s strengths, which helped us finish on time and receive high marks.

建議: Give a clearer, grammatically correct topic sentence and support it with one or two specific lessons learned, using linking words like 'for example' or 'also'. Avoid long, awkward phrases; be concise.

範例: I’ve learned that being a good leader requires continuous self-improvement and consistent effort. For example, I started giving clearer instructions and regular feedback to motivate my teammates, which improved our coordination.

建議: State your main point clearly, then give a specific example or consequence and a brief contrasting idea if possible. Use linking words like 'because', 'for instance', or 'however' and avoid repeating phrases.

範例: I dislike that the final outcome can be affected by one person’s lack of effort, because this can lower the whole team’s grade. For instance, in one project a teammate missed deadlines, which forced the rest of us to rush at the end and reduced the quality of our work.

× Neil, I'm don't really enjoy working in teams and I prefer solo projects.

✓ Neil, I don't really enjoy working in teams and I prefer solo projects.

The original contains an extra subject contraction 'I'm' before 'don't', which is a pronoun/auxiliary misuse. Remove 'I'm' to use the correct auxiliary 'do' with the pronoun 'I': 'I don't'. Suggestion: say 'I don't really enjoy...' to be grammatically correct.

× However, it is not really possible always complete projects all by myself, so teamwork is like a necessary evil in my case.

✓ However, it is not really possible to always complete projects all by myself, so teamwork is a necessary evil in my case.

The sentence misses the infinitive marker 'to' before 'complete' and has awkward adverb placement. Insert 'to' and place 'always' before the verb phrase: 'to always complete'. Also replace 'is like a necessary evil' with 'is a necessary evil' to remove informal filler 'like'.

× Of course I have, and I was even successful in working in team with other people.

✓ Of course I have, and I was even successful working in a team with other people.

The phrase 'working in team' is missing the article 'a' and the preposition 'in' with 'a team' is the correct collocation. Also 'successful in working' is more concise as 'successful working'. This fixes sentence structure and article use.

× I also enjoyed being a leader and taking responsibility for the group.

✓ I also enjoyed being the leader and taking responsibility for the group.

If the student refers to the specific role they held within that group, use the definite article 'the leader'. Using 'a leader' could work if referring to a general role; choose 'the' here for clarity. Suggestion: use 'the leader' when talking about a specific position.

× I think I'm quite fair in assigning responsibilities too.

✓ I think I'm quite fair in assigning responsibilities, too.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but needs a comma before 'too' for clarity. No subject-verb change required. The correction adds punctuation to improve readability.

× I think the main lesson I learned from working in a team is that something that requires constant effort in order to be a good manager or a leader, you have to improve yourself all the time and also put a lot of work into being a great example.

✓ I think the main lesson I learned from working in a team is that to be a good manager or leader requires constant effort; you have to improve yourself all the time and put a lot of work into being a good example.

The original mixes clause structures awkwardly. Recast the clause so the subject and verb align: 'to be a good manager or leader requires constant effort' or 'being a good manager or leader requires constant effort.' This fixes tense and clarity. Also replace 'great example' with 'good example' for natural collocation.

× I think the main reason I dislike teamwork is that the result depends on each member, and if one of the team members lacked responsibility or effort, the whole result of your teamwork would suffer.

✓ I think the main reason I dislike teamwork is that the result depends on each member, and if one of the team members lacks responsibility or effort, the whole result of the team's work will suffer.

The original mixes tenses ('dislike' present with 'lacked' past) and uses awkward phrases ('result of your teamwork'). Use present tense 'lacks' to match general statement, and rephrase 'the whole result of your teamwork' to 'the whole result of the team's work' for clearer preposition and possession.

× I think it's not really fair.

✓ I think it's not really fair.

This sentence is acceptable as written; no grammatical adjective/adverb error. Kept unchanged. Note: 'not really fair' correctly uses the adverb 'really' to modify 'fair'.