团队合作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你嘅答案有啲語言錯誤同埋用詞唔準確，例如「timber」應該係「teamwork」。建議你用更自然嘅英文表達，並且清晰講出你點解鍾意團隊合作。

範例: Yes, I like teamwork because it helps people connect and work together to achieve common goals. I enjoy the process of collaborating with others.

建議: 你嘅回答有好多語法同詞彙錯誤，例如「demote」用錯咗，句子結構唔清晰。建議你用簡單清楚嘅句子講述你有無參加過團隊合作，並用連接詞令句子更流暢。

範例: Yes, I have teamed up with others before, especially at school. We often have group projects where we need to discuss and plan how to complete the work together.

建議: 你嘅答案表達唔夠清晰，語法錯誤較多。建議你用更準確嘅語言講述你從團隊合作中學到嘅具體內容，並用連接詞令句子更連貫。

範例: From working in a team, I have learned that it is important to communicate and cooperate with others instead of focusing only on myself. Teamwork requires sharing ideas and responsibilities.

建議: 你嘅回答有語法同詞彙錯誤，例如「free rider」用得唔自然。建議你用更自然嘅表達方式，清楚講述你唔鍾意團隊合作嘅原因。

範例: I dislike when some team members do not contribute and rely on others to do all the work. This can be very frustrating and unfair to the rest of the team.

× Yes, I like timber.

✓ Yes, I like teamwork.

學生將 'teamwork' 誤寫為 'timber'，這是詞彙錯誤，導致句子意思不清。應使用正確詞彙 'teamwork' 以表達喜歡團隊合作。

× I think timber is a defense to connect each of other to doing something to attract are goals or something.

✓ I think teamwork is a way to connect with each other to do something to achieve our goals or something.

句中 'each of other' 應為 'each other'，且 'are goals' 應為 'our goals'，代詞使用錯誤影響句意。

× Yes, I always demote someone else before and just at school and there always have some group projects to us and need to connect each other how to do the work and how to preparing this kind of.

✓ Yes, I have always teamed up with someone else before, especially at school, and there are always some group projects for us where we need to connect with each other on how to do the work and how to prepare for this kind of project.

句中 'demote' 用錯，應為 'teamed up'；'there always have' 應為 'there are always'，主謂不一致；'connect each other' 應為 'connect with each other'，介詞使用錯誤；'how to preparing' 應為 'how to prepare'，動詞形式錯誤。

× The things I learned is doing a teamwork cannot focus on ourselves because the team have other and need to connect to things with others and talk with them.

✓ The things I learned are that doing teamwork means we cannot focus on ourselves because the team has others and we need to connect and talk with them.

'The things' 為複數，動詞應用複數 'are'；'team have' 應為 'team has'，主謂不一致；'doing a teamwork' 中 'a' 不應出現，因 'teamwork' 是不可數名詞。

× I think. Some free rider is some I dislike about teamwork because they don't want to do anything and it is very bad to what we are doing for the team.

✓ I think some free riders are what I dislike about teamwork because they don't want to do anything and it is very bad for what we are doing for the team.

'Some free rider is some' 結構不正確，應為 'some free riders are'; 'it is very bad to what we are doing' 應為 'it is very bad for what we are doing'，介詞使用錯誤。