团队合作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal belirsizlikler var. "attributes you new ideas" ifadesi yanlış kullanılmış ve "other ones opinion" ifadesi daha doğal hale getirilebilir. Ayrıca, cümleniz biraz uzun ve karmaşık, daha kısa ve net cümleler kullanmalısınız.

範例: Yes, I like teamwork because it allows me to hear different opinions and gain new ideas from others.

建議: Cümlenizde zaman kullanımı ve yapı açısından karışıklık var. "I have it before many times" ifadesi yanlış ve "including team with eight people" ifadesi doğal değil. Daha açık ve doğru zaman kullanımı ile cümlenizi sadeleştirmelisiniz.

範例: Yes, I have teamed up with others many times because I work in a global company with a team of eight people. We often share our opinions at work.

建議: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve tekrar hataları var. "listening to our listening to other ones ideas" ifadesi yanlış ve anlamı zorlaştırıyor. Ayrıca, cümleniz tamamlanmamış gibi görünüyor. Daha net ve doğru cümleler kurmalısınız.

範例: From working in a team, I have learned to be patient and to listen carefully to other people's ideas and perspectives.

建議: Cümleniz çok uzun ve tekrarlayıcı. Ayrıca, dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. "push me" yerine "pushes me" kullanılmalı ve cümleler daha akıcı olmalı. Daha kısa ve net cümleler kurarak kendinizi daha iyi ifade edebilirsiniz.

範例: I don't like it when someone pushes me to do things their way or tells me exactly how I should do something.

× Yes, I like teamwork because working in a team and hearing other ones opinion attributes you new ideas and new opinions.

✓ Yes, I like teamwork because working in a team and hearing others' opinions gives you new ideas and new opinions.

The phrase 'hearing other ones opinion' is incorrect. 'Other ones' should be 'others'' to indicate possession (opinions of others). Also, 'attributes you' is incorrect; the correct verb here is 'gives you' to express that hearing opinions provides new ideas. The verb 'attributes' is not used correctly in this context.

× Yes, I like teamwork because working in a team and hearing other ones opinion attributes you new ideas and new opinions.

✓ Yes, I like teamwork because working in a team and hearing others' opinions gives you new ideas and new opinions.

The pronoun 'other ones' is incorrect here. The correct possessive form is 'others'' to show that the opinions belong to other people.

× Yes, I have it before many times because I work, I'm working in a global company including team with eight people.

✓ Yes, I have done it many times before because I work, I'm working in a global company with a team of eight people.

The phrase 'I have it before many times' is incorrect. The present perfect tense requires a past participle verb, so 'have done it' is correct. Also, 'including team with eight people' is awkward; 'with a team of eight people' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Yes, I have it before many times because I work, I'm working in a global company including team with eight people.

✓ Yes, I have done it many times before because I work, I'm working in a global company with a team of eight people.

The preposition 'including' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate membership or association is 'with' as in 'with a team of eight people'.

× I learned from working in a team to be patient and listening to our listening to other ones ideas and the way of perspective.

✓ I learned from working in a team to be patient and to listen to others' ideas and their perspectives.

The phrase 'listening to our listening to other ones ideas and the way of perspective' is incorrect and redundant. It should be 'to listen to others' ideas and their perspectives.' Also, 'other ones' should be 'others'' to show possession.

× I learned from working in a team to be patient and listening to our listening to other ones ideas and the way of perspective.

✓ I learned from working in a team to be patient and to listen to others' ideas and their perspectives.

The pronoun 'other ones' is incorrect; the possessive form 'others'' is needed to indicate the ideas belong to other people.

× I learned from working in a team to be patient and listening to our listening to other ones ideas and the way of perspective.

✓ I learned from working in a team to be patient and to listen to others' ideas and their perspectives.

The phrase 'the way of perspective' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'their perspectives' or 'different perspectives'.

× I don't like when someone push me to do something in their own way or I don't like when someone says to me that you should do that like this I don't like.

✓ I don't like it when someone pushes me to do something their own way, or when someone tells me that I should do it like this; I don't like that.

The verb 'push' should be in third person singular 'pushes' to agree with 'someone'. Also, 'says to me that you should do that like this' is awkward; 'tells me that I should do it like this' is more natural. The modal verb 'should' is used correctly but the sentence structure needs improvement.