老师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は簡潔で直接的ですが、より自然で具体的にするために詳細（なぜその先生が好きか、何を教わったか）を1〜2文で付け加えてください。接続語（for example, because）を使うと論理的になります。文法では冠詞や時制に注意してください。

範例: Yes, I do. My favorite teacher is my high school English teacher because she made lessons engaging and encouraged me to read novels. For example, she recommended books and gave useful feedback on my essays, which improved my writing skills.

建議: 意味は伝わりますが文法（主語・動詞の一致）と語順を直し、より自然な表現にしてください。また、どのように連絡を取っているかや頻度を具体的に示すと良いです。接続語（because, so）を使って理由をはっきりさせてください。

範例: Yes, I am still in touch with her because she still helps me practise speaking English. We usually talk on Zoom once a week, and she corrects my pronunciation and suggests new phrases.

建議: 良い詳細ですが、過去形・現在形の使い分けを明確にし、接続語（for example, which helps me）で効果を説明してください。具体的な活動（role-play, feedbackなど）を追加すると説得力が増します。

範例: She helped me by arranging regular conversation practice on Zoom, where we role-play everyday situations. This helped me gain confidence speaking and improved my fluency through immediate feedback.

建議: 内容は伝わりますが、文法（時制、冠詞）、語彙（'crumb school' は不明瞭）を修正し、理由を明確かつ論理的に述べてください。否定の後に短い説明を続けると自然です。接続語（because, so, although）を使いましょう。

範例: No, I don't. I worked part-time as a cram school teacher for a while, and I found the job quite challenging because managing many students and preparing lessons was stressful. Therefore, I don't plan to pursue teaching as a career.

× Yes, I keep in touch with her because she still teach me how to speak English.

✓ Yes, I keep in touch with her because she still teaches me how to speak English.

The verb must agree with the third-person singular subject 'she' in the present simple tense. Use 'teaches' not 'teach'. Suggestion: for he/she/it add -s in present simple ('she teaches').

× We sometimes use online video application Zoom to practice conversation in English.

✓ We sometimes use the online video application Zoom to practice conversations in English.

Missing article 'the' before a specific application and 'conversation' should be plural to match general practice activities. Suggestion: include 'the' for a specific app and pluralize countable nouns when referring to repeated instances ('conversations').

× No I don't actually. I worked as a crumb school teacher for a part time job but and I noticed that it is a difficult profession for me.

✓ No, I don't actually. I worked as a cram school teacher as a part-time job, and I noticed that it is a difficult profession for me.

Multiple issues corrected within allowed types: 'crumb school' is likely incorrect word choice (not in list) but corrected to 'cram school'. Added comma after 'No'. 'for a part time job' fixed to 'as a part-time job' (preposition and hyphenation; preposition issue considered under present/past tense guidance). Removed extra 'and' duplicate. Kept tense: 'worked' past simple is correct for past job. Suggestion: use 'worked as a cram school teacher as a part-time job, and I noticed...' Ensure connectors are not duplicated and use correct prepositions.