老师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较自然且内容丰富，但可以避免重复表达“have a favorite teacher”，并且可以增加一些具体细节来增强说服力。

範例: Yes, my favorite teacher was my high school English teacher. She made lessons engaging by incorporating interesting stories and interactive activities, which inspired me to work harder on my language skills.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“in touching”应为“in touch”，以及“keep on contacting with”表达不自然。建议注意固定搭配和表达的准确性。

範例: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher. She was very kind and supportive, so I make an effort to keep contact with her through social media. Occasionally, we exchange messages, which is really nice.

建議: 回答结构清晰，内容具体且有例子支持。可以尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: She always took the time to explain difficult concepts clearly and patiently, which boosted my confidence in subjects. For instance, her support in improving my writing skills was invaluable.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“in future”应为“in the future”，“Teaching allow”应为“Teaching allows”。建议注意冠词和动词单复数一致。

範例: Yes, I would like to be a teacher in the future because I enjoy helping others learn and grow. Teaching allows me to share knowledge and make a positive impact on students' lives.

× Yes, I am still in touching with my primary school teacher.

✓ Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher.

短语“in touch with”表示保持联系，不能用“in touching with”。“touching”是动名词形式，这里应使用固定搭配“in touch with”。

× so I made an effort to keep on contacting with her through social media.

✓ so I made an effort to keep on contacting her through social media.

动词“contact”后面直接跟宾语，不需要介词“with”。“contacting with”是不正确的用法。

× Teaching allow me to share knowledge and make a positive impact on students lives.

✓ Teaching allows me to share knowledge and make a positive impact on students' lives.

主语“Teaching”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“allows”。此外，“students lives”缺少所有格，应为“students' lives”。