老师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子结构较简单，缺少连接词使得表达略显单调。建议使用连接词丰富句子结构，并增加具体细节以增强表达效果。

範例: Yes, I have a favourite teacher whom I met in a dance class. I still attend her classes regularly because she is very energetic, and whenever I join her lessons, I feel recharged and motivated to improve my dancing skills.

建議: 回答内容较为简单且有重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议避免重复，使用连接词使句子更连贯，并补充具体原因或感受。

範例: No, I am not in touch with my primary or secondary school teachers because I have not visited my old schools since I graduated, so we lost contact over time.

建議: 回答内容具体且有逻辑，但部分语法和词汇使用不够准确。建议注意时态和单复数形式，使用更多连接词使表达更自然。

範例: Firstly, she is very energetic, and every time I attend her class, I feel full of energy and passion, which boosts my motivation to learn dancing. Moreover, she always encourages me when I don't perform well, helping me improve.

建議: 回答表达了个人观点，但存在重复和语法错误，且句子较长不够简洁。建议避免重复，简化句子结构，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: I have never considered becoming a teacher because I am not very energetic. Also, I am introverted and lack the confidence to speak in front of many students, so I don't think I could positively influence them.

× I never went back to my mother's school after I graduate.

✓ I never went back to my mother's school after I graduated.

这里的时间是过去发生的动作，应该使用过去时态。'graduate' 应改为过去式 'graduated'。

× which boost my motivation to learn how to dance.

✓ which boosts my motivation to learn how to dance.

关系代词 'which' 指代单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'boosts'。

× I never went back to my mother's school after I graduate.

✓ I never went back to my mother's school after I graduated.

这里的错误主要是时态问题，已在上面指出。

× I'm really introverted and I think I'm not brave enough to speak in front of a lot of in front of a lot of students.

✓ I'm really introverted and I think I'm not brave enough to speak in front of a lot of students.

句子中重复了 'in front of a lot of'，应删除重复部分，保持表达简洁。