老师— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you have a favourite teacher?
考生
Yes I do. When I was in university I have an acting teacher who's always impressed me and give me a lot of ideas. He influenced me a lot.
考官
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
考生
Well, not really, because my primary primary school was already disappeared after after I graduate, so I didn't have any chance to keep in touch with my primary school teacher. It's quite long.
考官
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
考生
I remember when I was in great year 2 in my university, we have a we have an acting class called Solo Flight at. During that class we have to develop our individual shows. So he teached me a lot.
考官
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
考生
Well, I'm already became a teacher. Now I'm a vocal teacher. I I'm very interested in it because I feel like when I teach someone, I can give them my energy and my knowledge and I can help them.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you have a favourite teacher?
分數: 65.0建議: 你的回答中时态使用不准确，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，并且避免重复表达。可以用更连贯的句子表达对老师的印象和影响。
範例: Yes, I do. When I was at university, I had an acting teacher who always impressed me and gave me many creative ideas. He had a great influence on my development.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地说明原因，并注意语法和词汇的准确使用。
範例: Not really. My primary school was closed after I graduated, so I haven't had the chance to keep in touch with my primary school teacher.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。
範例: I remember in my second year at university, we had an acting class called Solo Flight. During that class, we had to develop our own individual shows, and my teacher taught me a lot about performance techniques.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答表达了清晰的观点，但存在时态错误和重复词汇。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复，并用更丰富的词汇表达兴趣和感受。
範例: Actually, I have already become a teacher. I am currently a vocal coach, and I really enjoy it because teaching allows me to share my energy and knowledge while helping others improve.
文法
× When I was in university I have an acting teacher who's always impressed me and give me a lot of ideas.
✓ When I was in university I had an acting teacher who always impressed me and gave me a lot of ideas.
句子中描述过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。'have'应改为过去式'had'，'give'应改为过去式'gave'，'who's'应为'who'，因为后面接动词。
× my primary primary school was already disappeared after after I graduate
✓ my primary school had already disappeared after I graduated
'disappeared'是过去分词，前面不需要'was'，应使用过去完成时'had disappeared'表示在过去某时间之前已经发生的动作；'graduate'应使用过去式'graduated'。
× so I didn't have any chance to keep in touch with my primary school teacher. It's quite long.
✓ so I didn't have any chance to keep in touch with my primary school teacher. It's been quite a long time.
'It's quite long'表达不完整，应该说'It's been quite a long time'表示时间长度。
× I remember when I was in great year 2 in my university, we have a we have an acting class called Solo Flight at.
✓ I remember when I was in great year 2 in my university, we had an acting class called Solo Flight.
'we have a we have an'重复且时态错误，描述过去应使用过去时'had'。
× So he teached me a lot.
✓ So he taught me a lot.
'teached'是错误形式，正确的过去式是'taught'。
× Well, I'm already became a teacher.
✓ Well, I've already become a teacher.
'I'm already became'时态混乱，应使用现在完成时'I've already become'表示到现在的状态。
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