老师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够完整且有语法错误，表达不自然。建议直接回答问题，避免冗余，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, my favorite teacher is my high school math teacher because he helped me improve my math skills significantly by explaining difficult concepts clearly.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，句子不连贯。建议使用正确时态和连词，补充具体细节，使回答更自然。

範例: Yes, I still keep in touch with my primary school teacher because we have a close friendship. Every winter holiday, I visit his home and we talk about our lives and studies.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用正确的时态和连词，具体说明帮助的方式，使表达更清晰。

範例: My favorite teacher helped me by teaching different methods to solve complex problems, and he also boosted my confidence, which helped me achieve high scores.

建議: 回答较为完整，但表达中有小错误，且用词不够准确。建议注意词汇的准确使用，避免拼写错误，使表达更自然。

範例: To be honest, I don't want to be a teacher because patience is very important for this job, and I don't think I have enough. Instead, I want to be an investor, which motivates me a lot.

× From his help, I did really a very high progress on my math such as.

✓ From his help, I really made a lot of progress in my math.

“progress”是不可数名词，不能用“a very high progress”，应改为“made a lot of progress”表示取得很大进步。

× my high school math teacher which helps me a lot.

✓ my high school math teacher who helps me a lot.

指人时应使用关系代词“who”而非“which”。

× Yes, I do keep in touch with my primary school teacher because we are have a very good friendship.

✓ Yes, I do keep in touch with my primary school teacher because we have a very good friendship.

“we are have”结构错误，应去掉“are”，正确为“we have”。

× Every winter holiday I came his home and we talk a lot about our life and our study and.

✓ Every winter holiday I come to his home and we talk a lot about our life and our study.

“come”后面需要加介词“to”表示“去某人家”。

× My favorite teacher helps me a lot such as tell me how to solve a complex problem in different many ways and also he helped me to build my confidence so that I can do the high scores.

✓ My favorite teacher helps me a lot, such as telling me how to solve a complex problem in many different ways, and also he helped me to build my confidence so that I can get high scores.

“such as”后应接动名词形式“telling”，而非动词原形“tell”。“different many ways”词序错误，应为“many different ways”。“do the high scores”表达不当，应为“get high scores”。

× I want to be an investor in the future, which is very motivative for me.

✓ I want to be an investor in the future, which is very motivating for me.

“motivative”不是正确形容词，应使用“motivating”表示“激励人的”。