老师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在重复和语法错误。建议注意语法结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: Yes, I had a favourite teacher in primary school who taught me English. Although I was not good at math, she was always very patient and supportive. I really admired her for her kindness and dedication.

建議: 回答中时态和表达不准确，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态，避免重复，并使表达更流畅自然。

範例: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher. Last week, I contacted her and told her that I have already graduated from university. We keep in regular contact, and I feel very fortunate to have her support.

建議: 表达不够清晰，存在语法错误和重复。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，避免重复，并具体说明帮助的方式。

範例: She helped me a lot with my emotional problems. For instance, whenever I had difficulties with my classmates, I would ask her for advice and support, which really helped me overcome those challenges.

建議: 语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议注意主谓一致，使用正确的词汇，并使句子更流畅。

範例: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I don't think I am patient enough. I worry that I wouldn't be able to connect well with students.

× She taught my my subject but my math was very poor.

✓ She taught me my subjects but my math was very poor.

这里'subject'应该用复数形式'subjects'，因为通常一个学生会有多个科目。

× She always very patient for me.

✓ She was always very patient with me.

形容词'patient'后面应接介词'with'，表示对某人有耐心。

× the last week I connected with my primary teachers and I told her I already graduated in the university.

✓ Last week I contacted my primary school teacher and told her I had already graduated from the university.

'last week'表示过去时间，动词应使用过去时。'connected'改为'contacted'更合适。'graduate'的完成时态应为'had graduated'，并且介词应为'from'。

× I connected with my primary teachers and I told her

✓ I connected with my primary school teacher and I told her

前后主语不一致，'teachers'复数与后面的'she'单数不匹配，应统一为单数。

× We connected very often in daily life.

✓ We connect very often in daily life.

描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时。

× when I met some difficult relationship with my classmates, I always ask ask her for help.

✓ when I had some difficult relationships with my classmates, I always asked her for help.

'meet'与'relationship'搭配不当，应使用'had'。'relationship'应为复数形式。'ask'应使用过去时'asked'，因为描述过去的情况。

× I always ask ask her for help.

✓ I always asked her for help.

描述过去的习惯动作，动词应使用过去时。

× No, for myself I think I'm not a patient people so I worried about I can't touch the student very well so I don't want to be a teacher in the future.

✓ No, for myself I think I'm not a patient person so I worry that I can't reach the students very well, so I don't want to be a teacher in the future.

'people'是复数，需改为单数'person'。'worried about'后接从句时结构不正确，应改为'I worry that'。'touch the student'表达不当，应改为'reach the students'。

× I worried about I can't touch the student very well

✓ I worry that I can't reach the students very well

'worried about'后面不能直接接主语从句，需用'worried that'或改为'I worry that'。

× I can't touch the student very well

✓ I can't reach the students very well

'student'应为复数形式'students'，因为指的是多个学生。