老师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中语法和表达存在一些错误，如“she always patient”应为“she was always patient”，建议注意时态和冠词的使用。同时，回答较长且有些冗余，可以更简洁自然地表达。

範例: Yes, my favorite teacher was my high school math teacher because she was always kind and patient, even when I struggled with math.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“have chatting”应为“chat”，句子末尾不完整。建议注意句子结构完整性和时态一致性，避免表达不清。

範例: Yes, I am still in touch with my high school biology teacher. We often chat on WeChat, and I share my college life and problems with her.

建議: 回答中时态使用不当，如“She gives me”应为“She gave me”，且表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致，使用更地道的表达方式，并避免句子碎片。

範例: When I was in high school, I found biology very difficult. So, I asked my teacher for help. She gave me useful study tips and materials, which helped me understand biology better. Thanks to her guidance, I improved a lot.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，如“I'm not very patient person”应为“I'm not a very patient person”，句子末尾不完整。建议注意句子完整性，语法准确，并清晰表达观点。

範例: To be honest, I don't want to be a teacher because I am not a very patient person, and I don't feel confident in all subject areas.

× she always patient in teaching me math even though my math wasn't so great.

✓ she was always patient in teaching me math even though my math wasn't so great.

这里缺少了动词be的过去式was，表示过去的状态。'always patient'前应有动词，正确形式是'she was always patient'。

× we sometimes have chatting on WeChat, which is a regular application to communicate in China,

✓ we sometimes chat on WeChat, which is a regular application to communicate in China,

动词'have'后面不应直接跟动名词'chatting'，应直接用动词'chat'表示动作。

× I always share with her my college lives and some problem with my.

✓ I always share with her my college life and some problems with me.

'college lives'应为不可数名词'college life'，'some problem'应为复数形式'some problems'，'with my'应为'with me'，代词使用错误。

× I found biology is extremely difficult to me.

✓ I found biology extremely difficult for me.

形容词'difficult'后应接介词'for'表示对某人来说困难，'to me'用法不当。

× Therefore, I turned to her help.

✓ Therefore, I turned to her for help.

短语应为'turn to sb for help'，缺少介词'for'。

× She gives me some study tips and useful materials that can help me know biology better.

✓ She gave me some study tips and useful materials that can help me understand biology better.

前文时态为过去时，动词应改为过去式'gave'。另外，'help me know biology better'表达不自然，改为'help me understand biology better'更合适。

× Thanks for her guidance. I finally got great aids.

✓ Thanks to her guidance. I finally got great aid.

'Thanks for'应改为'Thanks to'表示感谢，'aids'通常指医疗设备，表达帮助时用不可数名词'aid'。

× I'm not very patient person which means I cannot resolve the students difficult problem very well

✓ I'm not a very patient person, which means I cannot resolve the students' difficult problems very well.

'patient'前应加冠词'a'，'students'后应加所有格撇号，'problem'应为复数形式'problems'。

× and second I'm not very well in some fields and I.

✓ and second, I'm not very good in some fields.

'not very well'应改为'not very good'形容能力，句子末尾不完整，应删去多余的'and I'。